Reviews for Unlikley Love
RaiJack lover chapter 1 . 11/22/2012
It was very good. I look all over for these and all I can find is stupid Kimiko/Rai. SO I THANK YOU FROM THE BOTTOM OF MY HEART. MAKE MORE!
NekoDarkness chapter 1 . 2/20/2010
UPDATE! It has been 6 years! If your not going to continue, let us know. Please update soon!
Tanaki Wolf chapter 1 . 3/25/2007
Ooh... Please keep going! I love this stuff! I'll support you all the way. Writing this good should not be confined to one-shots.
Deadness chapter 1 . 11/13/2006
...lemon?
Luffie chapter 1 . 6/10/2006
Wow. That was great, if not for the pure and simple fact the it was Jack/Rai slash, but it was written well also. I enjoyed reading this and it will go on my fav list. It will. Oh yes it shall. So anyway, good fic, please make more Jack/Rai. There Isn't Enough!
crystalas chapter 1 . 5/11/2006
i hope you do another bit to this is getting quite tense!
Setg'-in chapter 1 . 5/6/2006
oh my..hehehehe...yha they got it on...can they feel the love tonight, damn straight they ...see yha
sesshiefanatic101 chapter 1 . 3/13/2006
He tricked her up with the good work.

SEE'YA
Dragangrlgeisher chapter 1 . 1/31/2006
Ah! ruined the whole cycle! you just had to ruin it!

Rai: Me like jack spicer? NO WAY!

jack: who would like you anyway?

Kimiko kicked jack in the stomach. Oww! that gotta hurt! i shot kimiko a high five. Jack: you think?
WAT DA HECK chapter 1 . 12/16/2005
i'm srry 2 say dis but... DAT CHPT WAS SO LAME! I MEAN DA GAYNESS N ALL STUFF! DAT WAS WAS SO WIERD! * EYE TWITCHING* * FLAMES ALL AROUND THE ROOM* AWW MAN DAT WAS DA 300,0 HOUSE I BURNED 2DAY! OH WEL MUHAHAH MUHAHAH MUHAHAHA! *STARTS 2 WALK AWAY WID AN EVIL GRIN*
Full Metal Andy chapter 1 . 12/1/2005
oh oh...whats next?
electroniccookie chapter 1 . 11/24/2005
that was so cute
Call the Winds chapter 1 . 9/25/2005
Aw...cute n fluffy. Update please!
CharmingPrincess chapter 1 . 8/5/2005
Yeah I have to admit that was a weird sentence but it made sense somehow. Good job! It's cool to have authors who are brave enough to write this!
Cold-Creature chapter 1 . 7/31/2005
Man! This is great!... So why have you stopped?

Hehehe! I did that before... I'd been writing FF long before I knew they existed... -

You've done a good job here... I'm a little worried for Jack though... I hope Raimundo doesn't hurt his feelings... even if it's by accident.

Please up-date soon! This is driving me insane!

RG
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