I can't stop laughing. And coughing, darn cold... I'm loving this story!

Ey, I'm in Canada and I love the Salvation Army. It always has something new to find. Lots of good memories at the Sally-Ann.

So shad gryffindor, so shad

Know it is late, but i had not passed the sorting chapter yet, i want him sly, but he is bolt and lucky fool to be sly, so gryffindor should be but i love sly.

Oooooh sheet

Sucks bad grammar good story line I rate it a two

first of all you have no idea how long i waited to write this at the first chapter and i seriously hope you get this... seriously . anyway what i wanted to say was... WHO THE FREAK SAYS SCAVENGE SOME FOOD ! ( YOU KNOW WHAT I MEAN BY FREAK ) THINK ABOUT IT. the story itself was good , no great actually. but... the use of words was like what the****. actually it was just that one spot but other than that your great . i loved it . uhhhhhhhhh ,this might be to late but please read. ( :

It Is The Second Option

Stupider is a word, the laptop says so.

um... strange decision.. that is just weird. Like, picture yourself wanting to meet someone, and then he just smiles and pulls down his pants. That is just, weird...

oops

ooh! evil cliffy!

gg

Mistake: the kind of cum u r trying to spell is come. cum has to do with things of a sexual nature. kinda funny mistake tho.

love the this part couldnt stop laughin 4 nearly 5min