Aww man this story rocks! It's such a shame you didn't finish it after all, it was waaaay cool!

Hr

Good first chapter.

Frankly even in 33 Chapters you could not get HP with GW. When are you going to do it. When you are ending the story..

Come on, this is halfway through the story and its still NOT HG as mentioned. I am a great fan of HG pairing and cant wait. Sorry but otherwise this is great

Hello,
How come we can't PM you? We hope you are not sick! Keep writing... you could possible be as good a writer as JK but you will have to finish your stories! I read some of your reviews you have some very nice reviews keep writing I tried to finish your story but it just didn't work maybe if I keep trying I could get a job finishing ever body's stories!, then they can say they have written one two or three HP stories! Good luck finishing it , not much luck at all mostly just hard work! Just like my me helping a friend getting out of the house for a while, I take care of her mom who has dementia! I don't get paid or going to the Dr. With a friend who has to go 30 miles, I don't get paid but while I'm doing thes things when we aren't driving or I'm not making meals or getting her dressed I'm reading your and others fanfiction stories! So in a sence you are getting paid just like I am! Thanks again
For the ride, Miss Millie

Hello,
Things I've read about your story, #1 you don't use the communication with Hogwarts that Harry has to its best, it might be able to just take Voltamort & his slim balls, and lock them up in a newly made dungeness, where no one but the house can find them this way , Harry won't be a killer.
Another you can leave something for your child and family that they can be proud of your finished Harry Potter story! Not a half finished not full of off color words that I don't want to expose My grand children too. Or Harry & Ginny art sneaking away to jump each other's bones Thanks for that at least! I read for the ride to enjoy a adventure not to read about teenage harmonies, out of control? I'm 73, lol... my 93, year old mother in law has a better sex life life than anything you can write about! Loĺ...
I love the 4 second yrs... hope to see them more, Harry should see what animals they would be. He was taught things before he was old enough. In fact he should teach it to all his DAS as that would be great for them to all turn into different animals! He could use PT for extra sleeping, or trainning. They could think that Hogwarts was helping Harry doing it,
What to do with Snaps arm? Find a way for Harry the gand and the portraits to remove from his arm!
Good luck we are in your corner hoping that you can find at least time to write a ch. A month. We hope your family and your friends are doing well, and hope your family reads some of what we write so they really know how special your writing is and how much joy it brings to us,
0X Miss Millie 74 yr old great Grandmother I can't wait to share your story with all 18 of them.

Hello,
In this Ch. you used Just on name for Michael's. Just to let you know. I love Luna thanks for keeping heraround.
Have you fiqured out how to bring Sirius back yet? He keeps showing up in the enchanted pictures. Come on you have a brilliant mine you can get it done and maybe extend this story I love the way you write I have Ben sad each time I read it you tell us just a couple of ch left. I hope by now you would like to have a sequel to it. Let us have some happy ever after ...
How are you going to show us the demise of the dark... idiot? And of course the dump dumb dumb trader? Good luck in all you do Miss Millie

I wish this story was finished as promised years ago. But I'm guessing since it's been so many years it won't be

I've got to say I died laughing when Dumbledore said the girl was going to to school IN Niagara Falls. Since I live on the Niagara River I see the falls quite regularly and started thinking that the maid of the mist boats doubled as transportation for students. Maybe the guy who jumped off the falls in a barrel was a wizard

Really great story Please continue soon

46 chapters latter really... Really lol

I must say your story so far is quite amazing and original in a lot of ways but it's killing me seeing ginny with Dean I really hope that they git together soon

I love this story! I love the bonds between the characters (and you did a great job at characterization). I also love how realistic it seemed with Harry having trials in life as well as in the love department. Thank you for writing this!

Your still using YA and now suspenders, it’s Braces in UK, sidewalk is pavement,