Hey, that was very good! I like little kids! This one really displayed how well Tsuzuki reacts with children. It kept me on the edge of my seat, plase keep going with it! Poor 'Soka-chan...

Sounds really interesting! I can't wait to see what happens next!

wonderful story! I can't wait to read what happens next! Keep up the good work!

Hello Chiharu!

Let me start by saying that this story is adorable!

And… Oh My Gosh! Your scene with Tsuzuki and Susan was simply the cutest thing ever!

The only thing I found even remotely discouraging was the beginning. It seemed a little stale, but I understand that it can be difficult to lighten up those necessary briefings. Though, I loved your Tatsumi. He was so... um, lovingly sadistic? Yes, yes that will do.

Some parts get a little lacking in emotion (but I think I am just biased to a certain style, you know how thick I like to lay on emotions -smiles-). However, the subtle motions and actions that you do use add charm and enjoyment to the story and really give your characters depth.

Though I did get a little lost on the monkey bars. The actions were a little confusing in that part.

The way chapter 1 ended was so cute! Is Tsuzuki just better with little girls and Hisoka with the boys? Seems somehow appropriate.

That painting scene was dripping with cuteness,! It was very easy to imagine the paint in their hair -smiles-.

Oh, and does Yoshiko's husband have anything to do with those two suspiciously named helpers?

Anyways, you certainly have a flare for the adorable! Keep up the good work! I cannot wait for the next numbingly cute installment –smiles-.

AIPE! That was great! Best Yami fic I've read in a while, I think. I'm eagerly waiting for updates.

Hi! Glad to see you updated this! It's a good chapter! Keep up the good work! Update soon, okay? -

You must continue this! I really really want to see what happens! This is a great story I hope you continue it! Thank you for writing it so much!

Waah! Keep writing, keep writing! _

This is actually pretty good. _ Keep it up.

I loved it!

I think this story is great! please continue it!

Good start so far. I like it! Tsuzuki is definitely at home here. Poor Hisoka, I hope he'll last the case. He's really like an orphan himself (sort of) so i hope he'll grow to like the kids. It's a good fic! Update soon, okay?