Update soon!

sohrt chappie... -_- i'm depressed... i must read more! update plz! with longer chappies! and isn't Asfaloth Glorfindel's horse?

CUTEE~! _ i'm rapidly becoming a fan of your work here...

Sweet Sweet bliss, and I know LAdy Cantara wants you to update so do it sister.

I really like this story. keep up the great work!

Update soon! I really like this story!

Oh I love it! Tour story is so sweet! I can not wait for more ! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

Okay, this is a really sweet story, but you should warn people that it is not cannon. I was expecting a book cannon story. Here are somethings that I have to say:

Elladan is not spelled with an "e".

Asfaloth is Glorfindel's horse.

Arwen was in Lorien because she needed to get away after her mother passed away to the Grey Havens.

Aragorn knew he was the son of Arathorn the day he met Arwen.

Arwen did not love Aragorn at first. Not until they met again in Lothlorien 20 years later.

Gilrain is not dead.

And your formatting is really hard to read. But I guess it is an okay story for those people who have never read the books.

Ps. Arwen has grey eyes.

This story is great! You've written Arwen's POV so well. I hope you update soon!)

Excellent chapter! Update soon! :)

yay u updated! Poor Arwen-mixed feelings aren't the nicest thing in the world! plz keep going!

Wow. plz update! Aragorn is so cute, it makes me laugh that they are so nervous about talking and don't know what to say to each other. I'd like to see where this story goes, plz keep going!

Excellent start! I hope you update soon, I love the beginning og this story! It's very new, I've never read a fanfic quite like it. Continue!

I like your start. And now I want to read the chapter 2. I hope that you will update soon!