Type your review fic just die what a trashy story

It's not 'gawky' it's 'gaki'.
That aside, great premise.

God Bless

Great story.

If you don't know your naruto then don't write a fanfiction about...they're in the ELEMENTAL NATION not China

awesome

Like hell lee wouldve been beaten by haku. Hes way better than sasuke and wouldve dodged thise last 3 needles since u claimed he avoided all others. Stop being hypocritical u retard! Lee wouldve won and ino doesnt need to apologise to that thick billboard brow slutura!

I was disappointed with Naruto's fight. I would have thought he would have no problem with fighting against girls since he was trained to be a weapon like Gaara. But this chapter was alright.

Loved the chapter! Naruto's turn finally came, I hope he doesn't go easy on her! And I wonder if anyone will remember him! :D

Loved the chapter! I was expecting a bit more action in the forest, but this was good too. Sasuke is thinking about whether he had heard the name Naruto or not, can't wait until he figures out who Naruto is. Wonder if he'll remember that his mother had slapped him for trying to play with Naruto.

Loved the chapter! I am liking how things are so far. And I thought that Akagahara and the Forest of Death were two completely different places, I'm pretty sure that they are. Anyway, I am loving the chapter.

I'm going to take a guess and say that there aren't going to be any character bashing. And when are they going to notice Naruto's name?! I'm looking forward to when they do! :D

Loved the chapter! I'm so excited, the Chunin Exams is happening! I was really hoping that Naruto would be on Gaara's team, but this is good too! :D

Loved the chapter! I'm so glad that Naruto knows why Gaara is hated, now they'll be closer than ever! I know this is wrong, but I hope Gaara still turns into his cannon self, but only keeping Naruto close. His cannon self is the reason why he became one of my favorite Naruto characters! :D

This is interesting. I think I tried reading this around the time I joined the site, but for some reason I stopped reading. I don't know if I had finished reading this or not, but I'm looking forward to reading it! :D

um, not to be nitpicky but it kinda throws me off, that last line-"summon a kyuuni". i think it would sound just a bit better if you said instead "summon THE kyuubi"-more impact, you know?

ack talk about unhappy endings although I suppose from the perspective of Konoha its pretty happy...Orochi dead, Sandaime alive, Sasuke can't run off with Orochi now and they get Naruto back. Unfortunately Suna and Gaara and the rest aren't seen in a different light and well yeah not a good ending for these guys. Still I did like all of it, including Naruto's fights, interactions with everyone and how it all progressed. Would have liked to see more of a reaction to the Twin Kyuubi's showing up, I mean no one seemed to show any reaction to Naruto summoning them aside from Sasuke and his was mediocre at best lol. Really liked how Naruto viewed the Kazekage and that he stopped Gaara again...I mean what else was there to do? Probably saved his adopted siblings at any rate. Also pleased that you didn't go into too much detail with the fights and that they were different to standard canon. The only other thing was the fact the ANBU didn't following him into Wind Country...if they were right there it wouldn't haven't taken them long to catch up and the decision to cross the border to retrieve the Kyuubi jinchuriki could be easily explained away. But that was kinda the starting point so...nevermind yeah? Enjoyed this one thank you :D