Reviews for Always the Innocent |
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![]() ![]() Please make another chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really liked how you had this in the first-person perspective. Excellent job! X Ever Yours, Lauren Nicole |
![]() ![]() ![]() ;bni To translate that into something remotely resembling thought: OMG!11!1!one!1!11eleventyone!11!1! Teh 4w350?/\/\3z0r!1!1 To translate that into something remotely resembling /coherent/ thought: Wow. That was written beautifully, the images were spectacular, and the ending was fantastically haunting. I am in awe. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh. very dark tone. Great job with this. I don't like the idea of the T/G romance but otherwise- great fic. xD -paradox |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well! Not a big Tom/anyone shipper, I confess, but this was so rich and dark and violent, how can I not love it? I've been looking for a fic like this for ages. You're a very talented writer; your Tom is wonderfully chilling. I loved this: "she'd scream as I ravaged her, scream to the higher powers or to her mother or to me - " I've seen lots of speculation on whether the violation of Ginny was literal or metaphorical; generally I go for the metaphorical side, but this is very convincing. Great work. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Amazingly well done, perfect tone and word usage. I loved Tom admiring his new hands and "she'd taste of autumn and tears and blood" is a fantastic line. I loved this fic. |
![]() ![]() ![]() very, very chillful. i love this! i just recently became a tom/ginny shipper, but you make it more of a great ship! i hope there's more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() OOh.. chilling, and beautiful. A mastery. I adore it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() END? You aren't going to finish it? Oh please, I want more! I'm slowly but surely becoming a Tom/Ginny shipper. I loved this piece of work. Well, perhaps it would be best left at where it is, but if you do get a plot bunny, please continue! Cheers and happy writing :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was cool! Really, I liked it! You might even consider going on with it. You know? Continue? Just a suggestion. *looks around* Sorry, I don't have any flames to light the fire with. I liked it too much. |
![]() ![]() Wonderful story! I'm a big T/G fan. Nice detail, describing Tom's desire. |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh... good story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wonderful writing! And I'm bad at writing constructive reviews; I'll leave it at that. ) |
![]() ![]() ![]() i love this. it gives voice to some evil little thoughts i've had about ginny and tom riddle. short and sweet. just adding it to my favorites... |
![]() ![]() brillant! |