Reviews for Adjustments
CrossoverFan chapter 33 . 8/31/2010
One of the best chapters more New X-men awesome.

Really emotional talk between Slayer and Vince. Another really emotional talk between Sarah and Logan.

Some PG-13 enjoyment because you left the scene before anything happened.

And Sinister's going to make trouble for Town X, though I thought he was going to confirm his suspicions because Wolverine and X-23 were in the area and outside the shield.
CrossoverFan chapter 32 . 8/29/2010
Yeah Elixir woo-hoo, sorry I'm a big fan of the New X-Men.

They had four of them on Wolverine and the X-Men, but dust and Rockslide were only in one episode.
CrossoverFan chapter 29 . 8/21/2010
Sinister's super soldier, My first thought was Vincent. Then Jamie as that would allow for an army. Then I thought Magneto but would he share that even with Morbius?, Oh or Wolverine!

End statement-I have no idea who the Super Soldier is but thes are my guesses.

Oh or maybe Xavier, no that would be like admiting Xavier's more powerful then him and he wouldn't do that.

End statement-have no idea who the Super Soldier is, but this is an awesome story.
CrossoverFan chapter 27 . 8/17/2010
I really enjoyed how forward Sarah was.

"I don't know but I think I can find out."

"-do you have romantic feelings for Ororo?"

She just asks him. That is so funny, and I hope that was her whole plan.

but I'm sure there's more to it like she was sniffing for pharamones or something.
CrossoverFan chapter 25 . 7/28/2010
"Painful Memories" This chapter is very well named. As some of the X-men and August retell their most psinful memories.

And Logan got a future painful memory from Sarah's question. Ha-ha.

But I really enjoyed the good times you slipped in their, Sam and Tabby so funny.
CrossoverFan chapter 24 . 7/28/2010
Ghost Rider and Selene's daughter very nice twists.

Great chapter and story as always.
CrossoverFan chapter 23 . 7/25/2010
For a second I was wondering why Bobby didn't go with them, but then I remembered he was captured. By the way is Iceman an X-man yet? He should be by now I mean he is Iceman.

Also I'd like to see Rogue use her powers a little more, ever since she became super strong she stopped zapping people, if she zapped King Bedlam the Hellions would have been in serious trouble.

and as for the cake, I'll bet Kurt devoured it after his play date with Catseye.
CrossoverFan chapter 22 . 7/25/2010
Actually X23 was pretty close to one of the female doctors in the comics too, I think she may of killed her on accident, but X23 thought of her as her mother, the doctor even named X23 Laura.

When I looked X23 up to check if I spelled her name right I found out (according to Wikipedia) her first appearance was actually in X-men Evolution, and the doctors name was SARAH Kinney, and she was used as X23's surrogate mother. Which makes me think you Might have already known all about this and named X23 Sarah because of it, which seems a little odd to me.

But it's your story and I enjoy it so who am I to complain?
CrossoverFan chapter 18 . 7/21/2010
I'm surprised Remy wasn't seriously hurt when Rougue punched him, because she was striking instinctively I'm surprised she was able to hold back.

Also I'm surprised you wrote Remy riding a motorcycle without a helmet. That show made Wolverine where a helmet, which will always upsets me, the sensors forced a helmet on a character with an unbreakable skull, on the plus side in Wolverine and the X-Men he takes a parashute free swan dive from a helicopter which was pretty cool.
Raven Hufflepuff chapter 6 . 9/9/2008
I think Quinn would have fitted her better. After all Quinn and Logan were names used in Sliders for the main character and his female counterpart. It would be a great in-joke.
Tatsu-ZZmage chapter 15 . 12/16/2007
in the immortal words of Charily Brown ARG! Ruby631 went and deleted it.
AnthonyR89 chapter 14 . 6/16/2007
good story so far. i lost track of this story for a while and just started reading it again. but while i was only in karate long enough to get a yellow belt, arent they called Katas, not Katras? or is that a Bushido thing?
AnthonyR chapter 38 . 7/16/2006
goos story. his brother was involved with the attack on his clan wasnt he.
AnthonyR chapter 18 . 7/15/2006
good story, as always.

you are gonna have him join the hellfire club, arent you, and btw its sign not sigh.
stardow chapter 26 . 3/2/2006
what about peter!
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