Super short, super sweet and super enjoyable.

I really liked this.

-Alex

This is sweet. Very sweet with a nice spoon of angst to change it up. :)

Aww, so cute! ;)

nice

aawh. Though not normally a fan of any kind of Luna romance, you are entranced by the story and your attempt to review it as it was written, in second person, is not empty mockery but instead a simple experiment, although reading Hermione in second person wasn't something you think you could get used to.

You love the idea of two complete opposites being attracted to each other like Hermione and Luna, and from the story glean an enormous desire to throw off the mountanous heap of Drama homework you need to finish by Monday and write something, anything, about Draco Malfoy.

Only this morning you were talking about things provoking strange and entirely random desires. You marvel at the strangeness of life, and the way the green light of the dungeons bounces off his sleek blond hair, and the length of the review that you intended to be very brief.

Things are never as they seem. You loved the story you thought you would dislike. And you - you are a self-professed stranger, which most likely means that you are completely normal. At least, that's what you tell yourself; but don't worry, you don't believe you.

-for you.

Aww this is so sweet! Not a pairing/friendship I've read before but you capture its potential so well :-)

Thanks for writing,

HH

cool

I love this! It is very spare - not like my writing. I bet I've written reviews longer than your whole story, but then I'm known for being on the, um... verbose side. I admire your ability to pare down to the essentials and let them stand for themselves. This is a lovely moment between the two of them, and I like the second-person voice you've chosen to use - it's uncommon, and hard to do well, but you've really carried if off well. I'd love to see more.

Even though this was really short i really liked it it was very strange but good

aww, nice and fluffy

great fic _

Ah! Sweetnes. "She lives your nightmare..." "I think you are beautiful..." "I think you are strange..." Not a single word more then necessary for making this truly wonderful fic. The turning of the table where Hermione suddenly is the one being pittied by Luna. Yes, this was good.

Will you be adding more to this story?

Aw! So sweet! I loved it! As usual.

Aw, that was interesting.

Great fanfic. Love the ending.