Ha, Harry should have told Snape that Pansy knows the details. It would be easy to get them from her.

excellent story

Can't read this. the paragraph alignment makes this nearly impossible to focus. made it for paragraphs before I gave up. IM me if u ever edit this issue cause as it stands, all ill get from trying to read ur story is a severe headache

Wow

Damn, this is a boring story. All your characters do is stand around an talk about nothing. Is anything going to happen? Or is there going to be more idle chitchat? I should know by now that all stories that feature an OC sucks.

I saw the summary and I was pulled in! Even if this was published in '01, I shall read it! XD

Remus and Lupine are the same person

When I first started your story, I couldn't make up my mind if I liked what you wrote or not.
But I stayed with it and may I say, I was wrong. You knew where you were going and it was a very enjoyable ride.
Now onto the sequel you've written...

'Nagini' Snape?

No. Oh no.

It can't be true.

This just CAN'T be true.

It's simply NOT possible.

Don't tell me that Voldemort's pet snake is really Nagini Snape in her animagus form,

Thanks to all who have left reviews for the Staff of Orkney. I wrote this almost ten years ago when I was in college and had a blessed amount of time on my hands. I regret I never finished the series. Part of the reason for this was 1. I graduated from college and found myself with a job and less time on my hands 2. J.K. Rowling began writing again and I felt that the need for fiction continuing her story while she took that long hiatus between books 4 and 5 were not so much needed anymore and 3. I came up with an original story that consumed what time I did have.

If you enjoyed this and wouldn't mind a try at historical fiction, I have an original novel out as an e-book. You can read the beginning here: I will say a little bit of LaSal lives in my hero there...

Thank you again to all who were so supportive. The Harry Potter series will always have a place in my heart and while you may be disappointed I never finished the fan fiction series, you have much better now with Half Blood Prince and The Deathly Hallows. Slante!

Err...well yknow? Formaldehyde to me smells minty...I had zoology in highschool and well it smelled minty to me, it didnt stink as much as it should... am I strange? I love your fic!

Wow, this was very well written, i hope you write fast as i can see you haven't finished the next one...

Snape got a new history. Besides that this is a bit confusing, it's a very good story.

I really liked your story. I was disapointed with the ending. I know you were were writing a sequel, but you didn't conclude this story in a logical manner. It just sort of ended. I'm not sure if you'll get this review as it seems you haven't written anything in years. I hope you have kept up your writing in some manner as you have a talent that you shouldn't waste.

Weh! I almost had a heart attack! There I was, happily reading along this (Awesome) story and I see that 20 is the last chapter! Thankfully I caught the note at the end and am still alive to leave this review. I love your story. Erm...Very good OC and super duper plot line!

-Penguin Girl