What a dramatically ironic note on which to have left this.

I'm enjoying this. I much like the concept, and it's executed well, too. Though, given Merlin's diction, I would expect him to properly use "whom".

this is my favorite merlin tale. please tell me it is not over.

I love this story.. I am looking forward to the next chapter... Seriously keep going... :)

This is a very slight HP story. It's interesting though. Where does Archimedes come from?

Reading your story made me laugh. Several times. Which, in turn, made me choke on my sunflower seeds. I don't understand why the last sentence is ominous... Is it because of the word sealing? Oh well... Update soon!

Just got finished reading this! It's great, one of the most brilliant fics I've ever had the pleasure to read. I like how you portrayed Merlin, and how you're including all of the characters from Mythology.

I think I get why the last line of this chapter is ominous. Sealing's just a bit *too* useful of a tool to cause trouble, after all.

Very nice. I love your memoirs of merlin. In some ways, it makes the readers connect with merlin character. Wondeful!

well then. this chapter was extremely well written; i especially enjoyed riordan's lament of his unreturned love. sure it was melodramatic, but to your credit, it worked. good job.

ah! now i have no idea what to think! i don't think it's nimue, because that's too obvious...or am i over analyzing? or will it be morgan, in some convoluted twist of fate? or should i just read the next chapter? yes, that sounds good.

looks like merlin and nimue are about to take it to the next level: from obsessing to an actual conversation! i'm so proud of them...

wow, merlin's like a mother hen...worrying over his birds...don't ask why, buy that sentence seems absolutely hilarious to me. Moving on, I am fully quailing in front of the squirrel army. squirrels are demon spawn. they deserve to be cut off from bird feeders for the rest of their feeble existences. now that i've had my say, on to the next chapter!

i admit that i wasn't going to review this story-i was just going to use the I.D. number to plug it into my favorites. however, the lack of reviews is simply treasonous, so i'll do what i can to bring the number up ;)

anywho, i do love this story; it's hilarious and poignant at the same time. are you making the wizards immortal? because what you said about two members of the council having feathers from the same phoenix...Or are they forerunners of harry and voldemort? i should probably read the next chapter...

The classic Arthurian story in the Harry Potter universe. What's not to love. Plus you can capture a good voice for Merlin's journal/thoughts.

Very clever, I enjoyed reading it. :-)