Wow, I really wish I could respond to you, but since you don't have an account or guts to loggin, this will have to do. Thanks so much for the entertaining review. Do you honestly think I care about a fiction that I wrote a few years ago? I know how much it sucks, I'm just amazed that you even bothered to waste your time with it. I don't even write like this anymore, so I really don't care what anyone has to say about it. Thanks for the laugh, sweetie;)

Haha, that story made me laugh-and not at the parts I was supposed to. :S

Um, care for some constructive criticism, sweetie? (I don't say that in a condescending way, just so you know). Well, here it is; if you don't want it, just don't read it. There are just a couple things about your fics that drive me crazy (but still, if I have the ghastly desire to read fanfiction I read yours... odd.) Anyway:

1. You use vague pronouns a LOT. Make sure you name your character more often, it's more professional. The last sentence is a good example. It's all, "he pulled her closer... he looked at her... he finally knew..." I know it can feel awkward to say the character's name a lot in such a short space, but it is, like I said earlier, more professional. Also, if you use a bit more description it becomes easier to use names more than once. In a three sentence paragraph where the sentences are all short (5-18 words, if I remember correctly) it makes it hard for anything to sound right. So spruce up with some more description, would be my advice, I guess.

2. Your incessant use of the word "also". Gah! It makes me want to throw things. "She nodded, also". Homygod, there are other words! Use "too" or "as well". Or just describe more, as I stated in point number one.

3. I don't like the organisation of your character action verses speech. And that probably made no sense, so here's a lovely little example I took from your very own story-chapter 13.

“I’ve wanted to do that for so long.” He said and she smiled at him.

“I’m glad you finally did.” Spike smiled also and then thought of something.

“What about Angel?” Buffy knew he would ask that.

“I broke up with him..."

It's really confusing. It should read (in my opinion and ignoring the use of "also" in the first paragraph):

“I’ve wanted to do that for so long.” He said.

She smiled at him. "I'm glad you finally did."

Spike smiled also and then thought of something. "What about Angel?"

Buffy knew he would ask that. "I broke up with him..."

Anyway, that's just my opinion on things. I hope I helped in some way, shape or form. (Who knows, I might have made you angry, and if I did, then I'm sorry.) Well, my dear, I hope you have a fantastic day (or night, whenever you get this and whatever time it is in... wherever you are).

that was cute :)

wow im to lazy to sign in lol, well I think u should make a sequal because this story was freakin awesome!

Yay a Spuffy ending. Great story

liked it.

great story. I liked the ending. I hope you write another story soon. I like anything spuffy.

really good story. look forward to your next one. cute ending. glad she finally admitted it.

yeh i liked the ending, appy and good

greatstory overall

~lauren~

really great chapter, though i think it shopuld have been more detailed.

keep it up

~lauren~

Well, I can honestly say that this was one of my very favorites! And I think that the ending was perfect! Thank you for writing this great fic.

i

love

this

story

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update soon!

awesome! can't wait for more! thanx

Aww. Update soon, I hope to see them together.

oh how sweet plz tell me that they get together in the next chapter plzplzplz

bye

~lauren~