Reviews for Perfect |
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![]() ![]() ![]() more please |
![]() ![]() ![]() well i thought it was a good story, but when your heart isn't in something it is a challenge to keep going at it. and it is always a god thing to keep on writing through a challenge. it keeps you at the top of your game. so other then the rushed ending and the lack of fighting a challenge (with not everyone has to do, its just a suggestion) it was a good story. i did really like the story line. later dude, ps if you made a sequel i would love to read it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is great. |
![]() ![]() ![]() ::smile softly:: that was so...for lack of a better word...perfect |
![]() ![]() that was a great chapter, and a wonderful story overall, its just that after reading your flashback, i hope somebody kills LEO |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was a cute ending... maybe a little fast...but well... sometimes it happens... that your heart is not there anymore...Great work and I hope to read more from you soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story, it's really great! Chris is just so great, and I hope he wipes the Elders asses! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww, that letter was sweet |
![]() ![]() ![]() I promise you mom, I will save Wyatt... but the I promise you mom, I will give dad another shot kinda of got lost in the middle of the GG bridge! THis guy that reads what he wants to read and just ignores what is convenient! I hope everything get solved with Leo and with everything |
![]() ![]() ![]() AH I really so hope Leo goes after Chris and tells him he is going to make sure everything is going to be ok for him |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved the What did I do that was so wrong? I believe everyone knows him at Chris! It was a great line! Poor Chris, Leo abandoned him again. And poor Leo... he is in so much trouble |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow! Yeah the song is harsh and poor Chris! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like it |
![]() ![]() ![]() its great! keep it up, cant wait |
![]() ![]() what? i dont get it! who said that? and what is he gonna be punnished for? the way he treated chris? if thats the case, then why didnt they do something earier? and why would they care? cause chris is a whiteligter? AH! elders are stupid anyway! if i were leo "id be like screw you guys, im going home" (sorry about the south park reference, it popped in my head so i had to write it!) and let them just clip my wings for good! anyway thats enough rambling about how i dont like the all-knowing dumbasses! UPDATE SOON...please? |