Reviews for Perfect
brendafay chapter 5 . 10/8/2015
more please
goldacharmed chapter 5 . 8/23/2008
well i thought it was a good story, but when your heart isn't in something it is a challenge to keep going at it. and it is always a god thing to keep on writing through a challenge. it keeps you at the top of your game. so other then the rushed ending and the lack of fighting a challenge (with not everyone has to do, its just a suggestion) it was a good story. i did really like the story line. later dude, ps if you made a sequel i would love to read it.
Star Fata chapter 5 . 8/21/2006
This is great.
SuperPenguinLovesHerEdog chapter 5 . 10/24/2005
::smile softly:: that was so...for lack of a better word...perfect
J chapter 1 . 7/30/2005
that was a great chapter, and a wonderful story overall, its just that after reading your flashback, i hope somebody kills LEO
Idreamofivan chapter 5 . 6/13/2005
That was a cute ending... maybe a little fast...but well... sometimes it happens... that your heart is not there anymore...Great work and I hope to read more from you soon
Kata Malfoy chapter 4 . 1/19/2005
I love this story, it's really great! Chris is just so great, and I hope he wipes the Elders asses!
PrincessLi02 chapter 4 . 12/13/2004
Aww, that letter was sweet
Idreamofivan chapter 4 . 12/12/2004
I promise you mom, I will save Wyatt... but the I promise you mom, I will give dad another shot kinda of got lost in the middle of the GG bridge! THis guy that reads what he wants to read and just ignores what is convenient! I hope everything get solved with Leo and with everything
Idreamofivan chapter 3 . 12/12/2004
AH I really so hope Leo goes after Chris and tells him he is going to make sure everything is going to be ok for him
Idreamofivan chapter 2 . 12/12/2004
I loved the What did I do that was so wrong? I believe everyone knows him at Chris! It was a great line! Poor Chris, Leo abandoned him again. And poor Leo... he is in so much trouble
Idreamofivan chapter 1 . 12/12/2004
Wow! Yeah the song is harsh and poor Chris!
Pic-a-boo-I-C-U chapter 3 . 8/6/2004
I like it
xheybails chapter 2 . 7/26/2004
its great! keep it up, cant wait
melissa chapter 2 . 7/21/2004
what?

i dont get it! who said that? and what is he gonna be punnished for? the way he treated chris? if thats the case, then why didnt they do something earier? and why would they care? cause chris is a whiteligter?

AH!

elders are stupid anyway! if i were leo "id be like screw you guys, im going home" (sorry about the south park reference, it popped in my head so i had to write it!) and let them just clip my wings for good!

anyway thats enough rambling about how i dont like the all-knowing dumbasses!

UPDATE SOON...please?
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