Reviews for Take Backs
lojosmom chapter 13 . 11/11/2017
I know it has been 12 years since you updated, but your story so far is nothing short of amazing. I think you have portrayed the reactions of both Harry and James perfectly. I doubt this will work, but I beg you to consider returning to this story.
Ohlivia.smith chapter 13 . 5/9/2016
Update please this is great please please continue soon :)
Morganite109 chapter 13 . 10/29/2015
Great
Winged-Ashes chapter 13 . 10/6/2014
It's good plz update soon
QueenDrakon chapter 13 . 4/15/2013
I love this story! They are so in character! Update soon soon soon!
kahurikuul chapter 5 . 4/3/2013
Umm..
Isn't James getting over Lily's death a bit too quickly?
I mean if it seemed to James like Voldemort had just "killed" him, then how is he already so okay with Lily's death that he doesn't even think about the love of his life being dead?
Icepen chapter 13 . 12/14/2012
awww the end was sooo sweet!
Lady Miss Nothing chapter 13 . 8/15/2012
sooo cute. I'm really loving this fic and I already cry a lot hehe
don't give up ok?! It's one of the best fic I've ever read and I really want to know how it will end
lalalla chapter 13 . 7/24/2012
ever heard the song keep holding on by avril lavigne? fits this story perfectly. amazing story by the way.
Obscured Angel chapter 13 . 5/27/2012
This was such a great story

Thank you for writing and posting
notrachels chapter 13 . 3/9/2012
:)
Vicki219 chapter 13 . 9/3/2011
Aww that's so sad! Please update some more
Immortalis Cruor Elf chapter 13 . 5/4/2011
update sooooooooooooon!
Griffin Raven chapter 13 . 10/15/2010
Why do I think that James's sudden return to the land of the living is in someway linked to MoldyShorts rebirth in someway? Though I definitely can't wait to find out just how and why James was able to return. Let along the reaction of the rest of the Order of the Phoenix once they learn (if Dumbledore allows the Order to know!) that James is alive "again"? Though I can honestly imagine that a certain potions master, Severus Snape, definitely won't be pleased to learn about James's return...though I do think that James's should apologise to Severus. Especially in light of the grief that Harry has suffered from him, because of how James and his friends bullied Severus throughout there schooldays...though will he?

I definitely thought that James would have been angrier at Dumbledore for placing his son, Harry with the Dursleys? Just how will he treat him now that he's learnt some of the things that have happened to Harry whilst "supposedly safe" at Hogwarts? Sure'll Harry can be better protected by his father James, Remus and Sirius, than he would ever be with the those Dursleys? Does James (and Sirius, Remus) plan to take any further retribution against the Dursleys for there "neglect, starvation and darn right abuse" of Harry? I do hope so!
XritaskeeterhatersX chapter 13 . 9/20/2010
This is great!
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