is there more? do kel and dom end up together? and why is kel betrothed to another if she doesn't even love him?

okAY i'm crying! This was one of the saddest stories ever! OMG *Sobs* Well *sob* done *sob* great *sob* job!

PLease, please, please, WRITE MORE!

i have to know what happens! Don't make it a one-shot, polease (I'm down on my hands and knees, begging you!)

this is really good!

no u have to write more but err sorry no ideas

You have to add another chpater and Dom HAS to live! Do you hear me? I think it would be good if you had Kel go to the realm of the gods or something to bring him back. That would be exciting. But i like it as a bittersweet oneshot, too.

i think this story is very god...

no!

lv dom too much...no

just makes me sad rereading all your stories...you are such a good writer, its not fair!

luv it!

more-more-more-more-more! PLEASE! *puppy eyes(

Poor Dom. Poor Kel. How 'bout you kill of the other dude? Huh? Please?

better as a 1 shot uless he is still alive

This story is so cute! Even as a one shot. I'm on the verge of tears, well not really, but you know what I mean. Personally, I think that you should continue! Id idolize you forever if you would! I'll even construct a shrine in your honor!

that was good i think it would make a good story but I'm not sure how though because if Dom doesn't survive and Kel gets married to someone else tehn -no offense- the story would be ruined. I'd love a proof reader but all my stories are Inu-yasha and Fruits i don't think u'd like them.

that was so sad... and so beautiful at the same time...

i luved it. but who is kel betrothed to? i'm curious. should be kept as a one shot. then, our imagination can think the rest!

-euna

Okay so I checked this out hopping it explained things, and it did, sorta. I like it a whole bunch just like I like the Spy. Very good. You should continue updating the Spy, unless that was the end. I'll review if you keep updateing.

Callie