I really enjoyed reading this! :D

I wish people would write more rikkugippal fics...just cuz its been like 10 years since it originally came out, doesnt mean it isnt good! :D

I just spent the last 3 days reading this awesome story. I know it's old, but I think it's always nice get reviews. I've just been on a huge Gippal/Rikku kick lately and this story was so satisfying. Thank you! Also, I would love to see more GxR from you (I know, old fandom, but still it would be nice). :)

wo great story

I love Gippal and Rikku! I wsh we had even more stories for me to read

OMG QWESOME STORY CAN'T WAIT FOR THE SEQUEL!

GOOD JOBB!

SUGAR911

ok, i am having trouble reading this because i just want rikku and gippal to make up now. but it is really good! if this story wasnt done yet, i would try to figure out the answer to that dang ? but no, this story has to already be completed. well, i'll add me AND my sister in the story im working on! i will try and keep reading now!

I know, i'm lazy...this review is for the entire story...but its like 3:00 in the morning and i'm not really up for reviewing for each chapter. Anyways, this story is totally, completely FANTASTIC! i love it...although some parts of it drag on a little...but thats bound to happen. And i'm really impressed by how far you took this, how well-though out the plot was, and how well constructed it is...very impressive, if your not already a writer you should really think about it...you definitely have talent!

whoaa, that was crazy. x_X i wonder if landon comes up again; he seems like a nice guy. ) funny about the hair clips..

haha i started laughing so hard when he said dona.. man that WAS really "pervy yet sweet"

ahh more cute moments! :) i can't believe there's still 14 chapters to go though, man. -_-

i really love this story so far. it has a little of everything! ) awesome job. *claps*

o_o *cries*

well, at least gippal got what he wanted, stupid idiot. -_- *throws a bean*

whoa. so like.. is it gippal's father now that's building the machina and stuff.. that's a pretty scary thought. o_O

omg i can't believe they played that.. that was hysterical. *falls over laughing* baralai and paine.. harhar. they finally kissed though! :)

omg I LOVE YOU.. i had NO idea that vidina was future in al bhed.. whoaa talk about weird! thanks so much for revealing that to me, hah. i feel so stupid.. but that's kinda cool. :)

awwh gippal's so caring.. xD *cough*

ohh, exciting. o i'm glad they got through fighting that.. wonder who the guy controlling it is though.

btw you have some grammar issues though it's kinda pointless to say it now cause you've written it so long ago.. but anyways.

effect is a noun.. like something's effect on something... but affect is a verb. like "it affected me severely" or "the effect of this on that is blahblah"

awesome chapter! :) i like the action scenes.. you actually have all the dress spheres and stuff included which makes it a lot more interesting. it'll be really interesting to find out who's behind it and their motive.. etc. :D

hmm gippal does seem out of character now that i think about it. oh well, whatever.

seems like a great start so far! :) i don't think gippal seemed too out of character.. which is good, cause it's always weird when he is.

haha the part about brother finding love kinda affected me.. i've NEVER read a story about brother finding love! :o poor brother.. :( but at the same time, i think it'd be kinda funny.

anyways i think i'll like reading more of this, so off i go now~