"I died for freedom. But not my own." - such a befitting way to end this short but very sweet fic. You really have a great way of understanding and putting Lancelot's intricacies into words.

Wonderful story!

OH... MY... FRIGGIN'... GAWDS! That so was totally wicked! I loved everything about it! Simple, short, straight to the point with a soul piercing saddness that brought me to tears! So beautiful! Wonderfully written indeed! LONG LIVE LANCE/GUINE ROMANCE!

OMG, I don't know about your other short stories but this one is simply beautiful. Everything was perfect from the beginning till the end.

I love it! I love the way you write about Lance and Gwen...I already ask you but be patiente with me,Please write another ff on Lance and Guinevere with an happy ending!

This is a beautiful xmas gift!

Thanks!

Astasia

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Those last few lines actually got me a little choked up...

"The arrow buried in his chest was naught but an exclamation." - I truly wish to God I could write with as much imagery and beauty as you do...but, being a guy, I guess that's a little hard..;-)

No, *never* think that you're terrible at writing *anything*...your stories and all the reviews you've received should tell you differently...

very sweet even if the horrid death happens *sniff*

you do NOT suck at writing short stories! you are an AWESOME writer and this is an AWESOME story! i can't wait for more of your lance/gwen stories!

you do NOT suck at writing short stories! you are an AWESOME writer and this is an AWESOME story! i can't wait for more of your lance/gwen stories!

That was really beautiful and unusual. Lovely.

That was great! I really enjoy reading your stories.

P.S. You are not horrible AT ALL at short stories!

I loved it. YOu did such a great job. Makes me just have chills and flashbacks.