Reviews for Secrets of Green and black |
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Twizzie chapter 1 . 2/6/2006 boy. this might have had potential,but i have two words for you. MARY SUE! I also took a peek at your bio,and I might seem like one myself so I'm not calling you one,but to a lot of people You may seem to be somewhat of a mary sue yourself. Heaven won't take me and hells afraid I'll take over? Come on. at least be origional. By the way,this is CONSTRUCTIVE CRITISCISM YOU PANSY! Fanfic's are made to be FICTIONAL! They are usually based on the author's VISION OF HOW THE STORY WOULD GO! You don't have to pick on every little thing that isnt totally real. P.S.: The rating was under teen you moron. Wait,im getting off subject. Sorry. You need to get her down to one power,and perhaps a single,small side effect. it's ok for her to be into the same stuff as beast boy, but tone it down a bit. it might be better for you to keep your oc's out of the teen titans world. no offense. well,sort of but not really. |
It's a secret chapter 1 . 10/11/2005 OCs on teen titans suck. Sorry. And I don't like you. Not that you care. |
dehumanization chapter 1 . 12/23/2004 hey again we meet! i have reviewed everyone of your stories! b/c i love them! and you! but keep it up i really enjoy your stories!bye! i love oyu! ashley! |
To Many Words chapter 1 . 9/7/2004 dude two words, that...rocked. now one word BOOYA! Can't wait till u update. Ha i rhymed. |
kp chapter 1 . 8/30/2004 sorry, but i HATE it when people bring their ocs into the tt |
scoodoo58 chapter 1 . 8/19/2004 That was awesome continue. Go Terra Bashers! P.S. "No! Don't Eat me. No!" That was priceless |
JakMakai chapter 1 . 8/16/2004 yay! "anorexic blonde suit" lol update soon please thanx |
StarryRavenFire chapter 1 . 8/12/2004 I like it so far. It is interesting. Please update soon! ] |
dana1313 chapter 1 . 8/12/2004 yea! finnaly! i good raven bb fict! and nice terra bashing! i applude u! |
rockafellow chapter 1 . 8/12/2004 plz update soon! |
FanKnight chapter 1 . 8/12/2004 YAY! UPDATE SOON! |
LunaLady chapter 1 . 11/27/2004 Listen up everyone reading the reviews! It is because of this talented writer that now I am obsessed with Teen Titans!My television is programmed to turn on to cartoon network when it turns on! It is unavoidable! XD Anywho~ I loved the story! and cuz im so special I've already read part of chapter 2 and it rocks! I love the refrences *winkwink* *nudgenudge* and everything about it! Go BB and Raven! Toya and Aya(Ceres)! Tamahome and Miaka(fushigi yugi)! Rei and Kira (mars)! Kyo and Alice (alice the 19th) ! Inuyasha and Kagome (inuyasha)! ~LunaLady~ *mew* *mew* |