Reviews for Never Gone, Never Forgotten, and Never Letting Go |
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![]() ![]() why did you stop writing this? |
![]() ![]() Sirius is a star? Bellatrix is also the name of a star in the constellation of Orion. That’s just me being weird. Ignore me. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is truly weird and I love it |
![]() ![]() ![]() What the hell is going on here thoo? |
![]() ![]() ![]() This just took a turn, and I will not sleep until I've finished this ( it's really late here ) |
![]() ![]() ![]() "Why don't you go find a curtain and fall through it or something" might just be one of the funniest things ever written in a harry potter fanfiction. Am currently binge reading this and love the story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is the best one i have ever read :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is some seriously underappreciated Sirius and Harry love. Bravo. |
![]() ![]() That was one of the best Fanfics I have ever read. Wow |
![]() ![]() YESSSSSSSS! I GUESSED IT RIGHT! Amazing story, perfect ending! Love you! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love it! You had me confused and trying to solve the "mystery" to pretty much crying because it was so sweet or so amazingly hard on Harry or Sirius to laughing my head off to just being content on how well this was written. Great job! |
![]() ![]() This was an AMAZING story. You processed Harry's grief so convincingly, and described so well and so tenderly how important Sirius and he were to each other, without going over the top. I love how you portrayed their relationship after Harry woke up, full of willingness to love and trust each other. The only part of the story that I think needs improvement is in Chapter 13, when Harry comes out of his coma. Basically, I think you just need to make it clearer that he's realizing he was comatose and that this is now really reality. More specifically, the part where he sits up in the hospital bed and sees Sirius lying there- I think it would be clearer to the reader that Harry is actually awake now if he felt more of a shock at seeing Sirius in the flesh; or experiences physical sensations that make him realize that, even though his dreams felt real, where he is now is definitely real. Like I said, wonderful job. It made me so happy to get more of an insight (a thoughtful, well-written one) into Harry and Sirius' relationship. And, of course, it makes me so happy to see Sirius surviving the veil and finally getting the chance to find a sliver of happiness after a very dark life. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting (; |
![]() ![]() IM CONFUSED AND SCARED WHAT THE HELL IS HAPPENING it's really amazing wow UR so good the suspense and mystery r overwhelming |
![]() ![]() THE SUSPENSE HOLy shit man UR freaking amazing woahhhhhh! UR TOOO goood! |