well written... but I'm not entirely sure what was going on the whole time haha.

an excellent beginning~

I've read this story before, when it was completed, and have honestly thought it was great. I see you've started to repost, but i fear you're not making much progress, and that saddens me greatly.

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i wonder if it's too much trouble to finish your repost? :D

This was really great and I loved it but there were so many things I didn't understand _ Was Kenshin the one that murdered her parents? And how did Kenshin "murder" her when he saved her? What did Kaoru mean about him not believing her? There's a bunch more I didn't get (maybe this is one of the stories that aren't supposed to be completely understood? or maybe i'm just stupid...) Can somebody help me out?

dude, this is still as beautiful as the first one...

I would put quotes in my review but i decided that there's too many that are too great...

it is a lot more mature, there is a lot more you have to think about while reading.

still beautifulxyour writing is so much better and more meaningful than some bullshit writers that are on ffnet, lol. where's the end of the story? keep re-writing this... when i read the first version i thought it was fucking great, kinda i wish i could read it again, but..:P

Beautiful descriptions...a truly amazing story...wish you the best...

Wow, that was beautiful. Amazingly writen and a wonderful angst/romance. I loved it. Fantastic work!

if it's okay with you, can you also post the original story? i've just read them lately (from my sister's fanfiction files) and i also want to know what happened there. thanks! :)

Wow...0_o this is really good!

I have heard about your misadventure with having your stories deleted and tamper with your work. If no one has told you let me the first, you are not alone is this tragedy. A few of my friends who are authors like you have recently had people messing with their accounts and stories. We are not sure who the culprits are and are likewise just as frustrated that we cannot exact vicious retribution in retaliation for such attacks.

However, I was recently informed that you much of your work. While cannot aid you in recovering all your stories lost, I can aid you in this one. It just so happens that I have this entire story on my hard drive. I am more than willing to send it to you should you have need of my aid. I purposely signed in to allow you a link to my e-mail address. Normally I like to keep on the "down-low" with anonymous reviews but since my aid could be of use to someone in an extremely frustrating and similar situation as my friends I was compelled to offer my services should you need them.

Again the choice is yours. This was one of the most heart-wrenching and tear-jerking stories I have ever read. I have to say it was on par with Linay's "Broken Pieces." Again the choice is yours, I just wanted to inform you that this literary piece was not lost to us RK fanfiction fans.

Ja ne!

so sorry to hear about your account! i really loved 'memoirs' and was looking forward to reading an update! that's so sad!

I really like this story too, you have such a distintive writing style that i throughly enjoy and i hope that you'll let us know if and when you change your penname!

How well I could see and hear and feel and taste everything, even more importantly than how well I could see it.

Breathtaking.

hey..this was a good fic, though, aha ha...i'm confused by the whole thing..heh..yea, i understand some of the things going on, but most of the chapter is really confusing..heh..i was wondering if you could explain things in this fic for me (i'm really slow)and all...yeah..like the beginning is confusing...and kenshin says something about murdering her..yeah...those are some things that confuse me...so, could you email me and explain this story for me a bit?..heh..this is a sad fic, i can tell, but its just confusing for me! haha..

i really didnt understand ur story so can u email me explainin it 2 me im so stupid anyways bye

i'm crying.

I love your story, it is very beautiful. You have quite the lyrical voice. This is my favorite chapter so far .