Really liked the plot And... Let's get straight to the point i'm waiting for a promising kiss let alone a smexy scene to be shared better the soon-to-be COUPLE. (I AM GOING THROUGH SUCH A DIFFICULT PHASE IN MY LIFE WHERE IT TAKES EVERYTHING FROM MY SIDE TO JUST NOT HAVE WET DREAMS ON BL EVEN in FUCKING BROAD DAYLIGHT! ). sorry to bother you with my pervy thoughts but seriously all i ask for is only some playtime in bed between the main antagonist's. so far the story is good. looking forward to future updates and more of this & that if you know what i men *fangirling and nosebleeding at the the same time*if that even possessed.

DAMN, KAI. TYSON. YOU GUYS. STOP THE SEXUAL TENSION AND KISSOkay nevermind, don't mind me. Also, Rei, Max, GET IN QUICK DAMN IT. Your FRIENDS are in trouble. A LOT of trouble. which is why, dear Author, please save them and let them get together-please update this fic. And the others. Please.
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Awwwww they're actually locked in a closer nowʖ ͡cough* ANYWAY, good job Reialso why, why are you so naïve, Max xD I LIKE THIS
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WELP. SEE, SUSPENSE. MORE SUSPENSE. Damn it Kenny, how did you even-no, damn BALKOV FOR THIS.
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OOOOOOHHHH TENSION, TENSION. Seriously, putting all this suspense on this chapter is one awesome idea. Makes me realize how much I've missed this fic
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WELP HIL. Kai, you inconsiderate bastard (yes he has earned the title back now) and Max, damn it, don't follow Kai's footsteps and toy with officers also Rei why are you like this-so much for being unpredictable
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Aaand enter: Tyson, a Kai-obsessed officer and Rei, the interested officer. Also the whole peek-a-boo game intro. Gramps better be ready to eat that badge LOL. Also enter Hilary; the ordinary-looking suspicious girl who apparently is trying to run from a mansion. Not to mention Kai being somewhat considerateThis story is still awesome
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p.s. a tiny bit of wrong grammar, *your Kai and all but nah it's okay

Aaaaa I'm rereading this and falling back in love with the plot... I seriously like the way you write Max, so IC and I like how the tiny bit of 'Kai's past: Abbey' was mentioned. Like, at this point, we're somewhat curious of that and the characters are awesome.
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p.s. It's abbey not abbythough it's somewhat easily ignored

SERIOUSLY!
DAMMIT, YOU LITTLE...!

What story do you finish?!
I LOVE your plots, I also love AU stories, and totally a fan of TyKa, but SERIOUSLY! Pleaase, I'm begging you: FINISH YOUR STORIES!

I know I'm late. Very late. But please.
And I promise you I'm following your every move.

aww! please continue this awesome story!

Well, well, well.

What do we have here?

1: A story

2: story, in fact, though there is some mistakes.

3: A missing writer... What? Why havn't you updated? '''

I would actually like to know what happens..

Now, get your butt back here and beging writing!

Sincerely

~ Nathalaia Of The South ~

PS: Quite interesting story. Update for the safety of the world.

that was the best story i have ever read can you please write more chapters

love it please update

o! this story is really good! you have to update soon!

I have never read a fic like this one (I don't think) It's so cool! Please update!