Could you please be my editor in chief?! I Dont know if you still visit the site at all but if you do..
Could you lend a hand?

LOL! Ino sure is gutsy! XD Poor Shikamaru... but that's okay, because that's my entertainment (Yes, yes, I'm a horrible person, and I already know that, thank you ;) )

Just wondering, is your brother still suspicious as to why you're interested about guns? Maybe he thinks you're up to something... :3

About your writing, I think overall, it's fair. You just need to improve on better expressing the tone and mood you want. Right punctuation and word choice helps!

i.e. "controlled, barely roused anger" - anger wouldn't need to be controlled if it was barely roused, right?

Hope you like this review! Please update soon!

I Love It!

sweet! awesome show of character for shikamaru! It fits Ino well too. Sweet sifi!

Hmm. Slightly interesting.

I really like this story and I hope you will update it soon. It is well written and has an interesting plot. Also thanks for the good distraction from writing a paper. :). I hope you continue on with writing.

OMFG! PLEASE PLEASE PPLLEEAASSEE UPDATE SON!

oh my god this is wonderful! I know you wrote this what...almost 3 years ago but if ever inspiration hits you plz update! it really is good and i love it already!

I've seen this story on a few people's favorite lists and have only now decided to read it. A bit disappointing, but not bad. I agree with whoever commented on your use of the caps lock, but I also would like to point out that, well... You seem so very childish in your author's comments. You don't exactly sound like a child, but you sound like an adult with an adult's vocabulary and emotions, acting like a child. Really, its rather disappointing. But I suppose I shouldn't complain so much, seeing as how your story isn't bad.

This reminds me of the book, Ender's Game. I absolutly adore Shikamaru! I don't care what he's doing or who he's with most of the time but this is a really good fic. It's got plot, description and (GASP!) three dimensional charecters. I espacially liked the sub plot about Kiba. Please write mor

Wow...this story kicks ass! It's very unique and that's what I like about it. And I think you portray Ino's character perfectly, though I do believe that as she grows older she'll be ahem more mature, but that's just me. Anyway, I hope you update very soon as I am wondering what will happen next. Please don't keep me waiting! Also I think I know who 'Seraph' is...'Seraph' is Ino! I am so sure of it! As I said update very soon! lol

-Melanie (Minelle)

Okay, this one's unique. I dont know where the hell did you get all your awesome ideas. I mean, each is way different from one another. I envy you and your ideas, really...

Update~

I completly love this out of charater thing or different plot

Maybe you can make ino have physic powers like the girl off of the fantastic four susan I belive, or like Jean from x-men...I hope you get a chance to complete this fic.

Come ON! Its good and I read a lot of fanfics this fic i can tell is going to be fun if you UPDATE its been like a year!

Oh and Shikmaru is such fun.

Wow! Great ShikaIno fic so far! Please continue ASAP! .

i can't believe you haven't updated this in over a YEAR! it's an effing AWESOME story!

UPDATE THIS PULEASE!