Reviews for A Legend Known, With a Twist |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Google gives the translation for inu-kuro as black dog. I do know that Koga uses it as an insult for Inuyasha that I was pretty sure loosely translated to mutt-face. I really like this story but I felt it needed to be said. Also you tend to change your tenses a lot, from present to past and back, it can get confusing. Other than that as I said I'm really enjoying the story, and I haven't noticed any major grammar or spelling errors. |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG THAT WAS SO AMAZING! WOH! I LOVED IT! ;D |
![]() ![]() ![]() o already sounds amazing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() kagome is stupid T_T seriously, have she ever thought of how dangerous sesshoumaru CAN be and of all the concequences? ...just creating more trouble for inu T_T |
![]() ![]() Ooh I love Beauty and the Beast and Inuyasha so I just hadd to read a crossover. So far I like it. :3 Now for the tough love sista. The present tense is sorta hard to read to me. It's like reading a play script in story form.. which is weird. o.o Just my two cents. :] |
![]() ![]() ![]() I wonder what he looks like fully-so far I'm seeing longer fangs and claws and some fur on the regular hanyo in my mind's eye. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hmm. No one ever writes it from the "beast's" perspective in that scene. Nice. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ha! Hojo the horse. I don't doubt your purpose, but it's a nice image. And an interesting first chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very nice intro. I like long chapters and long stories. Alas, I must leave for church now. I review your intro because I like it and so I can find this story again later. :) Happy kodomo no hi/cinco de mayo! (childrens' day in Japan, Independence Day in Mexico-just a day in the US) |
![]() ![]() ![]() XD the ramen part reminds me alot of Naruto. XD Love your stoy! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome story |
![]() ![]() ![]() WOO-HOO! I loved it! Fantastic! You absolutly have to do more! This is the best 'Beauty and the Beast' story ever! Woo-HOO! I was clapping and dancing when they won! |
![]() ![]() ![]() LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVSE IT! |
![]() ![]() ![]() lovely lovely story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, that was a really good story, i loved it! out of all the B&B stories i've read, i think this one was the best. The only thing that slightly annoys me was that the story ended so suddenly, couldn't you have done an epilogue? oh well, it was really good anyway and it's your story so you don't have to listen to me if you don't want to. Good job on compleating it! ~*White Fuzzy Ears*~ |