Not bad for a start.

Why the hell would u kill sasuke off?! Do u want to torture naruto! And in your description of the fanfic u instead of saying character death u should have said main character death. Other than that it was fine, the story I mean.

You can't just end it like that! I'm literally crying right now!

NOOOOO HOW DARE YOU?!

Poor Kakashi :(

This is really interesting. :)

Why... why... why... why... why would you do that? I am crying so hard right now... The chapter was so good... but I wasn't mentally prepared... just, why...

OMG NARUTO LOVES CREPES LOVE CREPES TOO! Good chapter btw. I am currently preparing my mind, because this is a little too sweet at the moment. I am preparing for tragedy!

AHHHHH!
What the fuck is wrong with you?
You killed sasuke?
Noooooo!
WTF?
I think it might have been more tragic if naruto had died...

i like the ..meaness...to naruto...it shows his emo side..wich i adore

love the story so far...im not a big poetry fan...but it was ...evocitive...i like how it shows naruto has a deeper side inside him

...this chaptyer is...short...i perfer longer chapters...but i like the setup of sasukes hatred of naruto growing...it makes thier eventual pair up...more then perfect

i like this chapter...ur a good writer...not like me...im a bad writer...but u catch what i see naruto as perfectly...and sauske...and yea the schoool name is kinda dumb ...no offence

Im having a metal breakdown because of all these feels.
I hope your happy.

Nice.