Reviews for Pool Fun
Zoe chapter 2 . 4/13/2018
Hello,

I do not a prove of incest in real life unless both participants are of age and have consent from each other, but considering as you have put both of these into the story i am a fan. I would like it if you could update more, (I think it's a great story so far) and could you maybe put some more John x Alan please, it's so hard to find some that i haven't read yet.

Thankyou so much for reading this long review/request.
Guest chapter 1 . 10/2/2016
Holy cow, can you update please? Hot!
Guest chapter 2 . 10/2/2016
Holy fuck! Please continue!
Guest chapter 2 . 3/19/2016
This is really good so keep going!
Guest chapter 1 . 3/27/2014
more cgapters
Maverick1997 chapter 2 . 5/13/2012
Heey!

Great story. Just randomly thought of thunderbirds and decided to check out what slashfic was offered and BAM! Saw this story. It's great and I really hope you update soon. I've checked out a couple of your other stories too. Great work!

Mav
brokenangelwings16 chapter 2 . 1/23/2010
plz keep wrting its really good so far
axel house yuki fiend chapter 2 . 6/13/2009
great absolutely great more plz it's so great it needs another chapter
Fiona12690 chapter 2 . 7/30/2008
Drools... God that was hot! I mean super hot and god I can see the lovely bodies meshing together and gah it is lovely. No wonder their all so protective of each other hahaha. So hot! Please continue this is something I can't wait to read more of. Update soon please...I can see it...Drools

-Rogue
DanceOfTheEntWives chapter 2 . 4/2/2008
well i'll have to agree wih the rest of your reviewers. this is an awesome fic and i so hope you'll conitnue this soon _ it really is hot. wonder how you come up with these things
Kathryn chapter 2 . 3/1/2007
can you go on? this is getting good, your decription is great

Kathryn
sky's girl forever chapter 2 . 11/6/2006
-down on keens and brings hands up like a dog begging- More please?
White-Witch-Sakura chapter 2 . 10/20/2006
Damn, that was hot! Please continue, make it even hotter.. That was beautiful, *fans her self* I'm burning up... *rushes to the shower*
Wolf of Light chapter 2 . 10/6/2006
Please update as soon as possible.
Embry chapter 2 . 10/1/2006
Well, that's brotherly love for ya! hope you write another chapter!
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