Is this story dead? I just found it again after a few years and had to read it again because it's so amazing! Hopefully you'll update soon, but as long as you promise to finish this story, I'll be happy. :)

Dude, I'm absolutely loving this. I recognize it has been a looooong time since you've last written, and seeing your profile you're currently working on a revision, as well as your own mental state. I wish you luck at both! I really do hope to read you soon, man! Thank you for sharing what you have, it's been a very wild ride and I've been enjoying all that you've done so far.

I rarely come across a story as perfect as this one. This fic and the prequel are everything I could possibly want in a story. It's so good I can't handle it!

Awesome story! I'm glad I found this.

Oh please in the name of Kami update! I don't care if you're dead, update! I beg of you have to finish this! I know its been like 4 years and I know life is rough (believe me, it took me a full year to update one of my stories) but PLEASE!...ps this is the greatest Dragon Ball Z story of Piccolo ever! Like in the whole universe!

It's strange to see Goku ... normal. Behave normal like regular people.

I read all 12 chapters today, and dearly hope that there will be a 13th!

I love it! And I cant wait till you continue - oooo when's the next post? Damn story is exciting, muahahahahaha, piccolo is going to kick daimao's ass. bye!

Gee I was so busy with college I barely noticed this chapter came out XD. Glad you found a chance to write again. This chapter may have been filler but it is important filler and it leaves me anticipating more. I wouldn't mind more sensory details like smells and sounds. Nothing too over the top, just a description here and there to cement the setting. Patiently waiting for the next chapter. :)

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I saw your profile. I'm really sorry about what happened to you. I wouldn't blame you if you didn't feel like finishing the fic after this. You have to take care of yourself first and not worry about what other people think.

Once again I forgot to add a story to my favorites...ugh stupid button I thought i pressed it already.

Not bad not bad. I like this a lot. Showing that Daimao is still alive in a sense. Hmmm...this gives me an idea. One that I may not do for a while but it involves a certain Namekian, his sire, and another demon we know.

This was freaking amazing. Good luck on finishing your master thesis and getting married.

YESSSSSS! An update! Great chapter and I hope you continue agian soon! I really love your writing!

Are pigs flying? Seriously they must be cause you’re BACK! *little enzone dance* Really loved this one. It didn't advance the story much, but oh-boy did it up the bar on what they all are going through! (Personally loved the side scene between Krillin and Yamcha.) I've seen the Covers; they are some of Piccolo's best illustrations. Glade you brought that in. May I guess and say it was Ma Jr., his original self, who was yelling at/pleading with him from his mind to take the power, for self preservation, a little evolution of, or return to the base-form? Or was it a more sinister further into the parlor? He's got so many literal parts to his personality and mind, its dynamic, and that's part of the reason I love the character so much. Can't wait to read the next bit, (Yay they killed the spider! Cr#p! It was just errand boy!) and hopefully it will be before another year goes by. OH, btw, happy b-day to Pic, intentional or not you got this out for it!