still waiting for the next chapter.

Love the story! please update!

I have really enjoyed how you illustrated Logan and Ororo's blossoming relationship and the different scenarios that are presented in this story (such as the mission with the sentinels attacking and the unknown dangers that lurk around Ororo). I like the adventure of this story & can't wait to see what happens in the next chapters. Please update soon I loved this story & keep up the good work! :)

Why'd you stop? This is a great story and hope you come back to it!

Please finish! This is really good.

Great story, hope you ll update one day ,

please!update!
i love this story!

GOD! Continue, continue, continue PLEEEAAAASEEEE! You've got me wraped around your finger! GODDESS! You've got some particular skill, i love it. Please updatee

Great story I love the romance ... And I can't wait until rolo take things up a notch ...please finish it!

I'm late to this fic but I wanted to review it to say that as an author your vision is your vision. If you say something is one way in your fic then that's the way it should be. I haven't read Nienna's review but like you said, there's a way to share criticism without being harsh...another way to share constructive criticism is by clicking the PM and sending a message that way. Oh well getting off my soapbox and getting back to the story.

GOD!i like this!please update its

I am enjoying your story. Shouldn't thekids be helping out with dinner and th dishes? Twice we've seen Ororo doing the cooking and cleaning up. I noticed a few word choice mistakes:

When the students homework was do, the word is actually due.
When Ororo asked if Logan was board, it should be bored.

I really, really like this story! As a new fan of your work I BEG of you to post the next chapter to us loyal fans. I personally would be infinitely grateful for the new update. Thank you for sharing your stories and keep up the great work.

Why stop now dude nooooo LOL just please update its getting interesting

I started reading this story some time ago but I never reviewed it.

Now I recognise the importance of appreciation and feedback for the writers, so I started reviewing many of the fics that I saw a long time ago!

This story is one of the first of MANY RoLo fanfics that I have readed and is among my favorites.

I really like this story and I hope you update some day.

I apologize for any spelling error, english is not my first language...

Thanks! I wish you good luck and a happy writing :)