| Reviews for Seven Nights, Two Boys, One Little Sakura |
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  Guest chapter 14 . 12/7/2016 An interesting story line and great language! |
| Guest chapter 8 . 7/15/2015 I thought that mei ling's hair was black... |
 hannahchuu chapter 1 . 11/13/2012 yo first of all, i wanna say that i'm a filipino too. I know myself that I'm not good in my English grammar. But I think the way you tell your story is somehow unnatural. Well, I can't describe much it though. I think you should first write your story in filipino then translate it in english. Think of it as if you are going to tell (what they call) 'chika' with your friends. Just suggesting. BTW, 'Ne' is used (by the Japanese) when one wants to get someone's attention. So it would be simpler if both would just greet 'Ohayo'. And, also, it's 'Konnichiwa'. Hehehe. Sorry. I just took Japanese language class, that's why. |
| Eric chapter 3 . 6/24/2012 Your grammar is terrible, I don't even understand how other people enjoyed reading this. Maybe you should proof read you're work before you publish it, or have someone else proof read it for you. Kudos to you for trying, though. |
| Lit police chapter 5 . 5/22/2012 Your grammar and English are horrid. Its painful to read this. I an tell you're trying though and thats worth something ... Sort of. I suggest you have someone proof read before you publish. It will help a lot. |
| xxBlueGemxx chapter 14 . 7/8/2011 Sup my fellow filippinos...filippinas? obviously im filippino too and gusto ko talaga ang storiang ito sana magustoin ren nyo :) |
| xxBlueGemxx chapter 10 . 7/8/2011 WTF, KANATA! STOP FREAKING INTERRUPTING! |
| erikali03 chapter 2 . 4/22/2011 oh! what a co-incident? i view your profile and it shocked we both named erika how nice! :D Filipino: Babasahin ko pa lang yung story mo eh pero nagreview muna ko bago basahin tutal tapos naman na yung story.. :) English: I was just about to read your story but i first give my review for this before i read since the story is complete.. can you please reply me using tagalog? if you wont mind though _ good luck! :) |
| erikali03 chapter 1 . 4/22/2011 HEY! I'm a Filipino too! I think i can use tagalog in writing my review since you're a Filipino too right? :) |
| LittleMissMint chapter 4 . 2/12/2010 a group of 3, 2 boys and a girl.. with missions.. just like naruto |
| rosedreamer101 chapter 14 . 12/29/2009 lol, cute... |
| HarunaNiwa073 chapter 14 . 2/18/2009 haha! this was cute..! though i thought it was more fit to be rated as T... anyways.. AWESOME STORY! |
| NixRegina chapter 12 . 2/10/2009 um ... guides have sixxers though I'm not sure if it's spelt like that... |
| chachie18 chapter 1 . 8/21/2008 hey. :) u said, 'hi to all the filipinos out there.' im one of them . :) just saying hi back. haha! |
| MoonPrincess623 chapter 14 . 5/9/2008 This was good, i like it.. |
