This story is great. Vegeta stayed true to his character but it gave a great insight into what he may have been thinking. Thanks for writing... maybe a sequel with Koan?

omg i just love that ending. very good job on the story but whatever happened to kona.

wow...powerful story. i'm kind of curious what has happened to Koan and Cumber

AH!

Your Vegeta story was absolutly amazing! i LOVED it

please say your making a sequel?

I'LL CRY IF YOU DONT!

_

This story was fantastic. Thats all i can say. Just wow! So much emotion in your writing and in the storyline, i absolutly loved it! Thank you so much for posting this, It's one of the best things i've ever read! Well done :)

This was one of the best fanfics on this site. The fact that you could bring in a new character without giing up the feel of all of the original ones really says something about your ability to write. The spelling/grammar issues were very few and far between and I don't recall any major punctuation blunders.

Keep up the excellent work!

~Anon

Wow, just wow.

This is a great fic! Please, pretty please write a sequal? *has hopeful look* Please? (Great job o) )

This was a really good fic. Koan was a well developed character. I also like ur Vagrant Story fic! Keep up the good work!

GREAT