You tried too hard and it sucks. I've read better yaoi stories than this shit so moving on.

I want more! This is sooooooo good! I wanna know what happens next!

If only Trunks will like,haunt Goku or something as a Vegeta secretly wishes him back and Goku has no memories of his Good life and only his bad life and kills everyone on earth under the commands of his mission. :P

Too bad the previous chapter came out before I found shouldn't died in my he didn't know what he was doing anyways :P Anyways,this was an awesome the rape scenes didn't make me horny enough I enjoyed it.

OMFG VEGETA GOT RAPED! I feel bad for him but good story plan. No pain no game. My victim is my canvas their blood is my tears

This a seriously terribly awesome fic. Its one of those things u hope never come true. Evil little trunks is too much. The thought of him trying to take over his dad, is just a killer. Its just like I,said before too much. Wonderful fic.

I liked it he wasn't going to let his son butt fuck him so he took himself out. I am just laughing my fricking ass off, congrats Vegeta you took the easy way out.

this is so sad but a great story i love it )

Death is the best thing who could happen to him.

RIP

Soon.

I hate this site! Anyway, loved the fic, even though it was evil! bye bye!

*Sobs* you killed Goku! Oh and Vegeta seems pretty messed up to…This is an amazing fic. Trunks has gone rather insane though - I hope you chose to write a few more chapters, but if not that’s ok *sob* Well must be off *waves*

Holy shit! That was fuckin awesome!

Trunks's gone mad 's happen in this fic everybody act strange i think.

M...I'll be back.

Boss

Aw, slam it - I really had hoped that Vegeta would off Trunks... it would've made more sense - then he could've simply brought all back to life and since this is far enough down the timeline that their would be two wishes granted per summoning, maybe he could change the submissive thing for himself (would have to do that on the first wish, though, or have to worry about the obviously twisted Trunks...)

No! Don't run out of ideas! lol I like it, don't end it now...its so interesting! :D:D

But anyways its your choice and the story is just amazing! ;)