i don't know what to say, this story was sad from the beginning till the end. My favoritre characters are Yoh, Anna and Hao but in the end none of them are happy so is the light really restored? i don't think so, i just skipped the part you was being so harsh toward Anna's personnage (because you're more Hao's Fan i think) but it's not a problem cauz i don't dislike Hao. But the way you end the story. Yoh? how could you? it's just so mean!

Hmmm. It's quite amusing. I really liked this although there are holes in the story. But it doesn't matter anymore. It's really amazing! it really moved me, but maybe next time, can you make it a happy ending? He he. This is a masterpiece. Keep up the good work. ( sorry for the grammar...

Yoh!
Why? Why? Why?
Poor Hao ;ccccccccccccccc

OMG! W-What the fuck... ?! Oh dear, I'm shocked! I'm so looking forward the pretty good lovers... Oh God, you really good! I've no had any idea what was the problem... Beautiful story, my dear. But I hate a sad end. Now I'm goint to be sad all day. But you know what? This story gave me a lot. I thank you. Maybe you will read this... sometime.

The massacre at the end was good but i think u shouldve put more detail in it make it more evil and describe how hao and his followers and ren masacred the entire population of planet earth and u shouldve described more how every single asakura died yoh's friends so you can satisfy the audience more besides that the story was good :) next time u write this kind of thing put more details on the evil part i am sure a lot of pple would love it as much as i do :) Hao was always my favourite i am the villain type of guy i guess EVIL LURKS WITHIN ME... MUAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAH AHAHAHHHAH !
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ahh u killed him D:... u could have least made it so its like 2 souls in 1 body ... o well, ur forgiven since u said that he was comin bak XD... buh didnt u kinda spoil the sequel then? o.O awesome job!

*pika*

ow, eat donut at this chapter wasnt very good idea. I almost throwed it up when my stoma clenched in knots :/ it seemed so cruel

that was a good story

Okay, I must say that you got me lmao with this:

"I really dislike her…” Wow, I think that must be the most childish thing I’ve ever heard him say, he’s even pouting…is this really niisan?

“Join the club.” Ren’s as sarcastic as ever; at least that’s a constant.

“Try living with her…” Well, if you can’t beat them, join them, ne?

That was defenitely the top :3

And I love the "chibi me" thing too !

I really enjoyed this fic, and though I'm not really happy with its ending [maan, cant Hao ever have a happy ending ?], it doesnt feels wrong, on the contrary ...

I was ready to kill Miki and Yohmei -.-#

And Anna for the matter ...

Anyway, I really was sad with the situation that that cave/tunel brought up ... And I seriously think Hao should have talked with Yoh about it at the time ...

But that doesnt change the fact that your fic is beautiful, I truly loved it !

Very sweet yet sad ending. I think Yoh's innocence (if that's what you were trying to do) was portrayed very nicely. Hao's and Yoh's relationship also seemed very sweet.

Aww, what a sad ending to an awesome fic!

Ya know, as much as I'd love to kill you, I won't since if I did, you wouldn't be able to write the sequel that we ALL are looking forward too! XD Lol, just kiddin!

But you know, I think deep down a good bunch of us won't forget this fic ever because it has such an unforgettably sad ending.

I can't believe that you killed Yoh...T_T, I know that he's back where he belongs and not truly dead but I don't like hao not being with Yoh physically!T_T

*I still think that this fanfic is the best one that i've read yet! plus it's complete*

ehehehehe XD!

:'( Yoh is...gone *charges at the authour* I'LL KILL YOU!

Not really XD

Good story, great ending though :( I miss Yoh so much already.

Hao tried at least and secretly, I wanted him to burn everyone but Ren on the other other hand should burn too because he should have been in tears for Yoh's passing.

It is a good story and I enjoyed it. First person is annoying to read in because it misses things out like chracters moving from scene to scene and stuff but it was still an amazing story.

Well done :D

how could you make hao-sama so mean? anyway, i think it was quite good, but you MUST try seperating into paragraphs. reading a huge lump altogether is quite tiring. but i think you expressed emotions quite well, but remember, love is also a very feeling abstract idea, not only determined by physical contact.

i feel depressed... -.-' hao-sama is so...soft..

*cries in pity*