Dec 22..2018

This is a beautful, heartwarming story. The tension of waiting for mutual discovery is delicious. Good job!

Oh, so much cuteness! I kept screaming at them:

Jareth - "Just go over there, you idiot! She's right there!" and "For someone who watches her, you sure are missing some majorly obvious signs!"

Sarah - "Look up, look up, LOOK UP! Sarah! He's sitting right there, drawing you. Just look up!"

But yay! they got together in the end! And it was super cute too. *happy dance* Though I would have loved to read about what Sarah wrote, but I like the mystery of thinking what words her heart poured into those pages. Great story!

Beautiful~~!Love It,write more JS please. n_n

Oh... that was so nice. Great job!

Oh my goodness, I absolutely love this! This has got to be one of the best song Fan Fictions I have ever read. Heck, it's one of the best one shots I have ever read. The emotions in this where just so vivid and clear. Every thing felt wonderfully real and elegant.

Aw...great story. Just call me a hopeless romantic.

Aw... *wobbly eyes*

so heartbreaklingly beautiful I love it!

VERY GOOD

This was so sweet! I really do enjoy fics like these from time to time, such a nice break from the complicated fics with long plots. I definitely think you should write more. Or even one of those long fics with complicated plots.

What a unique premise and visualization. Internally action packed. Nicely done, please write more.

This is a beautiful piece of writing. 'Tis not frequent that I find a piece of writing that moves me as much as this one has. I can feel the hope, the love, the yearning, you transmited those feelings very well in your prose. Wonderful to know love exists, ne?