Always stick by each other.

A sweet little one-shot. Albeit a few typos, it was a good portrayal of the Scott/Jean romance. I liked how you described their closeness at both heart and soul, and how they could never be with anyone else. Also, the confirmation that Jean had really wanted to be with Scott instead of Duncan was good. Good job on incorporating a little Jean Grey comic history. I remember the story about Jean witnessing her friend's death and how she first discovered her powers upon accidentally entering her mind, linked with her friend until Annie passed away. You handled it well, and also the dream with April, a charcter from one of your earliest stories, right? And a very nice touch at the end, Agent-G, with using 'Together' as both the story's title and as the ending sentence. Well done.

Very good. Sweet too. You should write anthor chapter.

That is so sweet. And you’ve named X23 Sarah? Nice name.

Really really good. I like little stories like this. Ones that just deal with one little part of the X-Men's lives. And it's nice to see Scott and Jean getting a little fanfiction time.

I love this! Great job writing!

Jott is great! This is so sweet... But it got me wondering if Jean's pregnant... because instead of holding her elsewhere, Scott placed his hands on her stomach. This is a great story though! Keep writing more of this, please...

This was a good side story I think... It showed how Jean reacted to her past and April's death. Also it gets a little private view at what is going on between Jean and Scott.

Peace out

Cool man! JOTT rules all! And LoRo. That's awesome too! Pwah! Good going!

Aw. That's so sweet. I could never write romance stuff like that. Msotly cause that's just not my style, but also because I've never had a romantic relationship in my life before, and therefore have no idea what love feels like. Oh well. Boyfriends are too much responsibility anyway.

I'd like to apologize again for my idiot cousin's rude behavior. If you hate me forever I won't blame you. I'd hate me too.

Feel free to kill him. Do us all a favor.

P.S.: I assure you, he WILL pay for what he's done!

Damn. That was fluffy. I was wondering when someone would bring up annie. very cool, dude.

Great fic.

Did you get this idea as a result of my ideas from my chapter 3 review of 'Wanda's Thoughts'? I never thought that you would actually write a story about this.

I've always thought that Jean has never told anyone, including Scott, what happened many years ago when she faced that horrific and traumatising situation with Annie. I thought that it would be a better idea if Scott actually did not know about this, and this was something that only Professor Xavier knew, since its obvious that Jean has to have one on one sessions with the Professor, to help her to develop her telepathy and to control her potentially dangerous powers, since he's the only one that can do that, since Xavier is a telepath himself. I've also thought that he would be the only one that would know, because what happened with Jean many years ago is something that causes her powers to be uncontrollable and dangerous. IMO, anything that traumatic and horrific can cause anyone to be scarred for a really long time, especially when it happens to an innocent little kid. So its understanable that Jean has never gotten over that, and hasn't really told anyone. I think something like that takes many years to get over, which is understandble why Xavier is working so hard to help her.

But, I do hope that she's able to talk to someone else about this. I think she needs someone else, other than her mentor or her boyfriend, to talk to. I think she should talk to another female who's around her age about this, just so she can let it out of her, and to help her heal, mentally and emotionally. I think that Wanda would be good for that, since Wanda has faced tramatising things as well, when she was a kid. I think she could relate to Jean, in that aspect. I hope a conversation comes up, in your other stories.

AW JOTT...:-)

can we hope for a continuation ? with the adult discovering for their new relationship as lovers ?

Oh just one thing Jean spent 2 years into a coma, not 2 months, and at the end, I was surprised that she held his hand on her stomach for saying that he was with her, and not on her heart, would she be pregnant despite the birth control ?

Please go on :-)

Wen

AWESOME! This was really sweet man! I really liked it a lot! It really shows a more complex side to both Jean and Scott that a lot of people often fail to see. The part about Annie was definitely touching and the moments when she and Scott first became friends were also great as well! I really like how this coincides with "Adjustments" and it was a real pleaure to read! Keep up the great work man! You rock! Peace out!

so happy this chapter and sad in some ways can't to see your next story