Reviews for The King
Ari chapter 15 . 7/28
I am enjoying this story, you are a very witty writer with your dialogue. I am saddened it is unfinished and on a cliffhanger at that. Thank you for writing it and I hope you finish it someday.
pineapple-pancake chapter 1 . 5/12
Oh poor girl. I think her best option (considering that she doesn't know legolas) would be to sail to valinor. Definitely to leave the greenwood.
And what was that about not being allowed to have children? Were Not courtesans normally allowed to do that? I know it is your story and your rules, but I think it would be specially cruel to do that.
5993 chapter 15 . 5/6
could you pleassssss tell us all this story? it is to much for me to bear!
Ouch chapter 1 . 5/2
I'm not sure whether to be pleased, or disgusted, you write in such a way that it fills me with emotion and sympathy for the daughter, yet I also feel angry on her behalf. I want to lash out, to kick and scream or slit my/her throat in an act of final defiance. I hold my personal freedom very close to my heart, and to deny me that basic right is as good as killing me anyway. 10/10 can't read past here, I'm too shook.
Frankenpumpkin chapter 15 . 3/23
Love this story! I really hope you plan on continuing it because wowza! What a cliffhanger!
Enelya is a great OC, I love how she doesn't let Thranduil push her around!
Obi-Hung chapter 15 . 7/11/2018
I found this wonderful story again! PLEASE continue it!
firerosedreamer67 chapter 14 . 6/15/2018
Oh darn!I forgot you never finished this story!...
welliegirl16 chapter 15 . 3/13/2018
What a place to end! Please tell me you're planning on finishing this story? Its compelling and captivating and I think I may just die if I never get to read the end!
Radiant Innocence chapter 15 . 3/1/2018
...I know you’ll probably never update this, and that KILLS ME.
pineapple-pancake chapter 15 . 2/17/2018
Its sad to reach the end of the story knowing that this story is probably abandoned. Anyway... thank you blurr for writing and publishing it. I really enjoyed it.

The conversations were full of life and sparkle (I actually don't know how to express it). It was easy to see the friendship developing and growing interest among the characters.

My favorite part of this story of Enelya over the tree with the imaginary wind-river and the suffering soil. That was hilarious and very cute. I wonder where you got the inspiration for that.

I didn't understood thought why a concubine was not allowed to fall in love with his lord. I would have thought it would be even better, giving that the concubine is accepting to be sharing his lover with someone else.
pineapple-pancake chapter 4 . 2/17/2018
That was very sweet :)
pineapple-pancake chapter 3 . 2/17/2018
Love it!
jshaw0624 chapter 15 . 10/15/2017
Why...WHY! How could you promise completion of this great saga and end it there, unfinished! This is unacceptable and I demand that you complete it NOW!...Please!
firerosedreamer67 chapter 15 . 5/1/2016
I love this story of fated love and a naughty King!...It has taken me 2 days to read it all and just when Enel yards was going to tell him her deepest secret. ...It ran out of chapters! I am so hooked now and painfully, I must wait with everyone else! ...
xXMoonlitSorrowsXx chapter 15 . 4/22/2016
Ok I love this story but I know it's been YEARS since you've updated. Please don't give up!
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