| Reviews for While I Was Away |
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  Edwina chapter 4 . 7/23/2015 Poor Daisuke T-T |
| Daniel chapter 15 . 5/21/2014 Please finnish this fanfiction, actually it was a good one |
| Star Braveheart chapter 15 . 12/6/2013 Awe update! I've read the whole thing! Pretty good. Though there are a few things to critique. First Dark has purple eyes...you kept going back and forth between the two. Detail is important! Second there are quite of few error words through out the chapters. I know you mean one thing but there is another word there instead. Finally about the revising... Revise a how Risa and Satoshi got together. It was kinda thrown out there. Thank you for the hard work! It was a good read! |
 samiamf69 chapter 15 . 8/17/2011 why haven't you posted the last 2 chapters! omg your story is just sooo... i just can't even put in words how good it is. and i read to the last chapter you posted and there was still 2 missing and it greatly upsets me. btw do you know of any good rikuXkrad or rikuXsatoshi fanfics? i can't really find any just 1 or 2... but i really want to read some. |
| tentsubasa chapter 15 . 12/10/2010 Oh man! That was intense! *sigh* But where are the endings? |
| ShaoranXSakura1350 chapter 15 . 1/15/2010 everyone getting hearbreak or loving someone, please put the next chapter up |
| karu chapter 15 . 9/25/2009 I think it's confusing... |
| gg123 chapter 15 . 5/15/2009 continue story it's really good |
| xxmisslilangelxx chapter 15 . 12/1/2007 [this is starangel1230] HEYY goodness gracious it's been how long since you updated? T_T i really wannaa read :D so i hope you update soon |
| violet chapter 15 . 7/10/2007 was bored and lookin for something to read...and i chance up on this story...sO WAH!plz update soon!Dark Riku all tah way... |
| puppy chapter 6 . 7/6/2007 it's good! it's good! dark and riku should really be a pairing! i'm serious! hmm... what are your plans for krad though? ah well, on to the next chapter! you're doing great! |
| puppy chapter 5 . 7/6/2007 gwah! more! more! |
| puppy chapter 3 . 7/6/2007 i'm crying. i'm excited. i'm in suspense. i'm wishing satoshi HAD socked daisuke. wow. i wuv this fic don't i? yeah pretty much. GOOD JOB! by the way... continue your other fic "someone just for me" 'cause it's really good.(i forgot to comment. SORRY!) |
| darkness chapter 15 . 7/6/2007 update!this is a wonderful story and riku should be paired with dark because he loves her and shows it and have waited for her even when she said what she doesn't love all those years daisuke would seen her in that different light and now he's running back to riku?what if risa didn't refuse daisuke?when he wouldn't notice riku at the alternate ending should be in dark's favour though he can be too egomistic and need anger management lol Satoshi keep it up;) |
| Paeng chapter 15 . 5/29/2007 Oh please please update! I love youur story very much! So much mixed emotions that I couldn't help but not breath in some parts of the story! Haha! Good job! Very nice story! Please continue and update soon! J'adore While I Was Away! I study french so I understand the french words you put, haha! Kk! Bravo! Update soon! TTFN, OrangeBerry |
