Reviews for Nobody's Angel |
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![]() ![]() ![]() hey GerbilsRockMySocks here sayin that u inspured me to write ma own fan fic av reviewed another story of yours a think this ones legendary if u could read and review ma fan fic am in desperate need of tips and ma first 1s not doin so gd Hope to hear from you GerbiksRockmySocks |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was a good story! D The only thing I didn't like was that the tense changed from past to present xD Great job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() you should add an epilogue with yuna. she has to rush in with the cavalry because baralai practically told her riku was dead. |
![]() ![]() Great Fic...one of the best i'v ever read. keep up the good work! cant wait to read the follow-up! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Rikku/Baralai, eh? This is actually the first time I've ever read one. I'm very impressed. I liked your characterization of Baralai. While I'm not very familiar with his character, being only about half-finished with X-2, he seems to be IC. While I think that Rikku's a bit too depressed to be IC, she's going through a hard time and it's understandable. But, even at 21, I'd imagine Rikku to say "owie" more often then you portrayed her as. But it's still a very good story. Nice job |
![]() ![]() This was one of the best stories I have read on this site. I love Baralai and Rikku pairings, it has a wonderful feeling of innocence about them. I wish that the story didn't end, it is just well written and well told. I'd love to read more of your works. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww! I loved this so much! Please, write again soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hahahahaha! The Baralai and his pants line was too funny. 'My pants are still on, silly' I had a spasm right then. That was way back a few chapters but... hahahaha. I'm suck a dork. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really hope that Gippal and Rikku get back together. G and Paine don't seem the least bit right for each other. But the Rikku and Baralai pairing is adorable! Good job, I can't wait to see what happens! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Poor Rikku! Cute story though:) |
![]() ![]() Aww! This was such a cutie story! I've read so many Rikku/Gippal stories, but never one with Rikku/Baralai. You did a wonderful job, very well written. such a sweet ending. |
![]() ![]() sniffle sniffle that was so for not reviewing throughout this entire story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() it was so good! I don't like the thought of Paine and Gippal together, but Baralai and Rikku would make such a cute couple! |
![]() ![]() ![]() *cries* it was so good...you should write a sequel...it would be so good...*cries some more*...I LOVED IT... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Gr. -stomps on picture of Gippal- ... -stomps on picture of Gippal AND picture of Paine- |