Just discovered this story after re-reading another one of my favorites from you. I absolutely fell in love with this story! I finished it in one day and the feels! You wrote so wonderfully and I loved the dynamic between Serenity and Seto. Excellent- thank you for writing and sharing such a fantastic story and I know I'll be revisiting this over and over again :)

Love it love it love it!

I know this is about six years late - I never stumbled onto your story until yesterday - but this was fantastically written. I found it yesterday morning and to be quite honest, it sort of consumed my mind until I finished it. I couldn't pull myself away from it except to sleep. I'm going to have to have fun re-reading it, too. I was impressed with the intricate plot line and how well you kept everyone in character. Not to mention, the kiss scenes were simply delicious. I had a teeny problem with the grown-up Mokuba, as he never struck me as someone who would act with a girl like he does with Rebecca, but I can see how it can be passed off as saying he's Seto's little brother after all. But it does seem a little bit repetitive, seeing how their relationship already sounds like the way Seto's and Serenity's started off. But it's still quite interesting. I also have to mention that you set up all my favorite pairs of the cast. Joey and Mai were always perfect for each other if you ask me, and same with Tea and Yugi. Kaiba going after Serenity was an interesting twist though, and I love how you made it work out. I would have to say, this was the best love story I can recall ever reading. You have some wonderful talent. I just had to let you know how much I'm loving this, even if it is late, before I move onto your sequel. Thank you so much for a wonderful story!

Argh why haven't I reviewed on this story before! Seriously, I've read it like 5 times...

Yeah, its that good. Everything is placed just perfectly; it gives the sense that everything that happened could have happened; and everyone has suficient motivation to cover all of their actions, especially Seto and Serenity... its really interesting how this story morphed into something very unusual and unique. Seto just makes this story. Everyone, really, is very spot-on, and the different group dynamics seem well thought-out and meaningful. And everyone acts as one would expect under such high-pressure situations; it really makes the story genuine. There's really the right mix of all genres in here! Really, what could I give except boundless praise for this story! Thank you for writing this immensely enjoyable, satisfying, well-written story!

you are definitely evil

i know instead you could get her more feisty and then she fights something like that because i am a girl and i do not the least liked to be called whimpy

That was an amazing story and really deep! Everything was really well thought up and not at all typical. I'll be reading the sequal soon. Welldone and keep writing!

OH MY GOD! THAT WAS SO FUNNY!

“Oh! I forgot to tell you the best part Mai—it’s blue! I never saw a blue one before!” Tea exclaimed with glee.

“It happens occasionally Joey, it’s very rare and unique,” Mai shrugged it off—as if it were perfectly fine. “Besides I have seen a blue one before—it was so pretty.” She smiled. “I’m sure it’ll please Serenity, she’s a lucky girl, you have to see that…”

Kaiba is huge…and blue…and they all saw it…and he's going after my sister to…to…to give it to her?

They heard a large thud. Then they all ran over to assist a passed out Joey…

THAT WAS AMAZING! My Dad is looking at me all funny cuz I'm laughing hysterically. Good work.

Chapter 13? Oh how I long to be Serenity Wheeler...

I was going to review this last night, but by the time I read both this and the sequel it happened to be 1:30 AM and I was kinda tired and wanted to go to bed, but I want to review. Okay I'll stop my ramblings...

WOW! This story is simply amazing. I'm not lying, it's very well written and I enjoyed everything...okay maybe not the first few chapters wherethat rare hunter murder that one dude and Serenity capturing on film. I don't usually read Seto x Serenity fics, but this is superb. I loved how you use your words and the cat and mouse chase at the end of the fic. _ Anyways kudos to you.

- JC

PS-Update The Dream Realize soon. _ And if you have time I'd love it if you give me some feedback on my fic.

i think this is good

OMG, that wasn't what I had expected. but it was a wonderful ending. I loved it! At least there is a sequel! _

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Sweet. Freeze on!

Hey! I love your story! It roks! I can't wait to read the sequel...well I think you did a wonderful job! It was awesome...there just isn't a word to say how much I love your story! IT ROKS! well g2g read the sequel! ja ne!

i love this story esspecially all those twists hurry with the sequel till then i'll keep reading your other excellent fanfics such as the christmas gift (Genius Romantic story line)i love that story u r my fav writerof all time! _