| Reviews for The third |
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   halek240 chapter 1 . 1/9/2011 this is good why don't you update it. |
| Kate.x chapter 1 . 12/17/2008 Is the boy the new rave master or what...? Am...I really want to no what happens...! Please wright more please...!8D |
| Captain-Stark-is-a-Wizard chapter 1 . 11/15/2005 update! It's hilarious(sp?)! |
| lady-water-dragon chapter 1 . 1/28/2005 Hey! That was great, but next time make it way! longer! Don't give up on this it's great, even though it was short I loved it! Is he going to meet his special someone? Please! I hope he does! |
| grlquit46 chapter 1 . 12/11/2004 umm...correction! Shiva! haha! Sorry! Anyway, i like the story! Never mind those insults man! i believe that you're going to be good! :) |
| Nanaki chapter 1 . 11/10/2004 Is this story suppose to have a meaning? I'm bored, I'm logging off, bye... |
| Nanaki chapter 1 . 11/10/2004 Is this story suppose to have a meaning? I'm bored, I'm logging off, bye... |
| Ranma chapter 1 . 10/7/2004 It was okay, but you got a worst! Haru and Elie NEVER fight or Elie never yelled at Haru by using her it, and more people will like it. |
| someone chapter 1 . 10/7/2004 I love the starting of your story. Hope you could continue more of it *smile* |
| dragonsrage chapter 1 . 10/4/2004 this is realy good so far. i hope you keep on writing more on it. i absolutly love it. |
| Rave reader chapter 1 . 10/3/2004 whos Sakura? anyway, levin is in rave 007 right? good story, update! |
| Dark Princess Hime chapter 1 . 10/3/2004 Hrm... interesting... next chap pls! |
