It was awesome! And the ending part was so funny!
Thanks for your great story!

Awesome.

first of all, it's just SIBLINGS not "brother"hood...

it's a boy and girl! not a boy and boy!

second of all, your grammar is horrible! no offense ...:)

sorry if I said that "rudely"

third: The ending? not the best...

fourth: despite all those things, this was such a good story! I never saw the entire thing coming...

I loved this! The ending seemed perfect! Keep up the good work!

Lol! This is based off Dexter's lab isn't it? XD Great story by the way.

brothers? Cindy is a GIRL... brothers are two boys... sisters are two girls... siblings can be a boy and a girl

Seems interesting.

great fic but if he accidently became mr. willoughby, then that means jimmy is james isaac willoughby and it will be embarrassing for jimmy don't you think? anyway, make a sequel!

AWESOME STORY! IT ROX!

Awsome ending. I loved the idea of the fake DNA thing. However, you spelled Cinthia wrong (correctly spelled Cynthia). And, If I had written the piece, I would habe put more J/Cness in then just the end part.

The part near the begining where she says her real name is Cindy NEutron, reminded me of when me and my sister were writing a Fic (before we were old enough for when Libby said her real name was Libby Exteves, because she was now married (they were in collage). The first thing I thought of was Cindy getting married to Jimmy! (which would be awsome!)

Anyways and Allways

~Mariah

This story was great! I loved it, *sigh* you cant trust nurses that are dumb or dumb fathers lol. The ending was so funny. Your story is going to my fave list.

:.*Ashley*.:

oh crud and now I feel sorry for Hugh because of that crazy principal but Jimmy and Cindy being siblings...now that was cool.

your fellow author,

GK

this story is okay,but i don't like it! this story seems to ruin the J/C love! what THE HELL DO YOU WANT THEM TO INCEST? huh?huh? huh?

an awesome story! two thumbs up!

lol, funny ending