I really enjoyed the story. So disappointed that the chapters ended

Please update it

Harry can die. Wdym? The reason he didn’t was because at the time of this fight, his moms love protection thing was still active.

Way too much filler dialogue for me to enjoy this story

So far I've given every aspect of your story solid 'O's, its really well written, the msot glaring quality for me is your talent for not making the character seem/sound robotic, you make them real and as if they think before they speak, only chapter 1 but thats what I've gotten from Harry's letters to his friends, well done!

No, the supposed new author has NOT posted a chapter or you posted the last, since '06. Seeing as it's lest then a month till 2018 this is a dead fic. Though it does sound good.

Last updated Oct, 2006?! I am completely hooked on this story and it's been abandoned! The agony! The pain! I need chocolate.

Yay! A nonmanipulative!Dumbledore fic! xD you rarely find these anymore

I have enjoyed this very much. I hope you find time to finish it someday as I would love to read the ending:)

Sorry, Katie, good try but not good enough. You turned a good adventure story into not-so-good teenage angst, and then ruined it with bad spelling and grammar. The characters have changed too much, they are hardly recognizable from the previous chapter.

I know just enough French to recognize that something wasn't quite right with that headline, so I ran it through Google Translate and tweaked it bit:

Le Ministre britannique a Déshonoré !

Le garçon qui a vécu et les associés exposent Voldemort au monde et au ministère britannique.

"A minute or two after his clock displayed 9, he heard a crack that signaled Alastor Moody's departure."
The previous chapter has Dumbledore saying that Moody gets off at 8. Please fix it.

"He quickly rolled up the parchment and tied the note to Hedwig and sent her off to the Hermione. " Delete this sentence, it's redundant with the 2nd to last paragraph.

that whole emotional scene there made absolutely no sense at all. I should also point out that at this point in time before 6th year Hermione could not possibly know how to apparate rather large whole in the plot of this chapter don't you think.

Well chapter 1 is as good as it can be for a prologue. I was not expecting that much in first chapter. God knows it is difficult to let people know the changes on your fic while not do it in a boring way. Ill give my opinion on next chapters so on...