good but to short

Hahaha this is even better - you have her correcting Ron's grammar by making it incorrect
Milano is not 'slang' for Milan, but I sincerely hope you're being chaperoned even if you are in fact over the age of 12, because you seem to have appallingly bad judgment and I doubt you'd be discerning enough to know if this 'friend' was actually some sort of creep or criminal out to kill you

This story is goddamned hilarious because you seem like a shallow, whitewashed, brainwashed moron with no talent for writing or comprehension, and no woman with 'brains' would act the way this 'Hermione' does in the fic. Have you even read the Harry Potter books? Incidentally, the things you think make Hermione 'weak' are actually her greatest strengths. I hope you've stopped writing because I don't think it's fair to inflict this trash on anyone

I know what you mean. but you could either update your summary and say it's abandoned or just delete the story altogether. its kind of frustrating to get hooked in a story only to be informed in the end that the author has no intention of finishing it. have pity on your readers. it's a common courtesy.

Already tearing up!

Loved this story... sorry it wasn't finished!

this is a good story but to short

please update an finis it please

CONTINUE!

;-;

This. Is. Not. Fair! WHATS THE ENDING?

I was loving this one. Anyways I was either imagining hermione reuniting with Kyle while in Italy. Then getting hitched or drake and Mya getting their happy ending

Aww but I loved this story!

AWW MAN!
you just cant end it like that!
Im gonna cry big time if you plan on abandon this amazing fic wich i really hope that you havent even if it was years that you last updated, but please please try to keep writing it please!
its is really really awsome story and im so in love with it and i need to know what will happen next!
And i must say you are one terrific writer :-)
And this story.. I cant seem to find any words for how AMAZING it it!
The story just got better and better after each chapter you posted.
The story is really awsome:-D
And its now one of my absolute favorite stories
you have done a really amazing work with it so far :-) so please PLease keep coming with more chap. Im SO SO looking forward to read more of it and soon to so please dont abandon it

Ok at first the story was really well set out, but now I find it jumping in places, how did hermione go from flying to being stopped by Blaise