Eeeep! They're so cute!

Awwww sweetly cute!

This was funny and very entertaining and I love how Hermione totally taunts him and his eye twitch was great lol plus I love how he acts like the total spoiled brat he is and is all “I want it.” “Give it to me.” Lol but I have to say, it makes sense that he didn’t think about it, and saying he wasn’t being logical and went crazy when he smelt her breath makes it make a little more sense, BUT if all her chocolates fell to the ground... why didn’t he just grab one of those? Lol but I mean it makes sense that he just was being crazy lol I just think maybe if you made it clear that her chocolate breath made him crazy so he just kissed her instead of grabbing one off the ground would help with that problem. Or you could fix it so that the piece she put in her mouth was the last one lol, that would really drive Draco up a wall! Lol! But all in all, this was hilarious and I thoroughly enjoyed it! ;)

Ahahaha! That's great!

I love the way you told the story although I wouldn't mind more elaboration on the kissing part, because, well, that's important, hun. But overall was awesome and your plot was not really original but somehow was not cliche either. I loved it. Keep writing, dear!

fantastic! lol are you continuing this?

Hilarious! Great story.

So funny! Loved it! My fav part:

"I want it," he demanded.

She smiled wickedly. "Can't have it."

oh my god ... bloody hilarious

*faint*

So cute! XD Loved it!

homgzhomgzhomgz.

That was undeniably adorable.

Aw, That is absolutely adorable!

That was cute, brilliant, cute, sweet, cute, fluffy, awesome, cute and... Did I mention cute? Aargh! I'm like a little hyper now! I wanna eat chocolates now!

THAT is the best way to eat chocolate!