Well this going to be great could yo included the decepticons in the next chapter

... So, exactly what's going on here? Alpha Q actually evil? And who's Cruellock?

Hi there! Wow, this story is going well. You're a good writer. I'm so glad Kicker's back and okay. Well almost. The Autobots don't seem to trust him any more after that assult is "other half" did on the headquaters. I would have thought that at least Optimus would try to understand. But I guess being the leader of the Autobots who can't easily be understanding and forgiving. I only noticed a few typos in chapter 4, that could use editing, like "weather". The way you were using it in a sentance was the way of "whether" or not to do something, but you spelled "weather" as in the "weather" outside. It's one of those tricky words where they sound the same but are spelled differently. There are quite a few of those kinds of words in the English language. Anyway, please try to understand that I'm not critizing, just trying to help you improve. (Although I'm not perfect in writing either.) Well, please continue again soon. I can't wait to find out what happens next. Cya then! _

Please update soon.

please update soon.

Well on one hand, it's much easier to understand than the actual series. Though I was a little cross when Kicker did the whole Super Saiyan/Jeckyl and Hyde deal. Still, it was very dramatic, action packed, though a lot less transforming than I would like. Oh well, still a good work, even with the Thinker-like spelling. Nice job. My score: 3/5.

How sad! Up-Date soon!

OH MY GOSH! KICKER! HOLY SLAG! Update tomorrow or today! Right now! You've got me pinned to your story! *_*

Nice chapter. I still can't believe that one of the Autobots would think that Kicker's harmful though. Update soon. -_-

The story is really good. Please update soon.

Up-Date soon!

Please let it be Kicker!

Cool!

Hm, interesting plot here. is still a very nice man so, yeah. Kicker's still cool, and about the bullet thing. . . .. . umm right. . . . . . . . o.0; Well, I'm reading,and I LOVE IT!

Two sides of Kicker huh?... Oh well. Hope he doesn't kill anyone with his evil side. Keep updating and don't let it take as so long as the 4th chapter. alright? Okay good.