ok wow amazing, and to think that this fic was dated 12 years ago I'm in no hope that you will update this aren't you.
*sight* *sight again* holy crap I'm restless, I'm gonna keep on thinking about this for a while. This is such a good story, plot is interesting and the characters just just sooooo perfect. Ommggg whyyyyy?! I need a continuation

In all honest this is one of the best atobe/fuji fic around. You should really update it. I know its hard when you dont have time but I believe this story is too amazing to give up on. Great job I love it!

oh no you don't! What do you mean your account is on hiatus? How dfo you think I can survive without that answer of the final chapter?

aw... this fic's progressing so greatly, it would be a shame to lose it.

kisses, and I hope to see you soon

I love this story. You should keep writing more stories about this couple!

Loved it.. very different from those which I've read so far.

Me too, am wondering, you still alive? D

saa... so i get it that you won't update this snymore? hmm, that is very sad, coz this story is so beautiful.

hmm, now i am wondering, are you still alive?

dear Ranier,

you are a very gifted writer. i love all your stories. somehow i managed to read every story you wrote (thanks to the power of google!). i love everything, your style, your ideas, your creativity. *shining hero-worship eyes*

oh! please grace me more with your creativity. *bows*

You know, at first I was shocked with Shusuke's situation (the club and else). Also I didn't expect Atobe to be a father... but wow! Your story made me consider a different point of view!

It's very sweet in some way (I loved the 'fatherly' side of Keigo, also the kid ). I wonder what's wrong with Keigo and why he got drunk the previous day?

I can't wait to read the next chapter. You're doing a great job!

-Uracila

ps. If you like the AtobexFuji pairing, maybe you'd like to read my story. I'm still working on it. I'd like to find more KeigoxShusuke fans, as this couple (mysteriously) became one of my favourites.

your story is far from great

it was Great!

4 the first time i enjoy fuji involve with some one else

than tezuka,

continue, you have to continue...

please...

ja ne...

This story is incredible.

Please write more...

gasp.

oh my god a fricking cliffhanger tell me its not true...!

okayy. overdramatic statement overr. :]

ANYWAY, i think this story is GORGEOUS. i love you writing style-how you add some traditional japanese terms into the story.

usually it halts up the progress and takes away from the plot, but i think in your story, it just makes it more elegant. :]

and, i just fell in love with the idea of atobe's son. xD

AWW! okay, okayy...

i thought this one line in some other, previous chapter about how oishi was forced to schedule partners for his lover and his friends, and then he would just drink it all awayy... i thought that was the saddest thing everr.

and, calling all the companions by girl-names just made me snicker. even if it wasnt supposed to. xD

okayy, yeahh, i dont normally go for this pairing-but i really like this. EVEN IF IT DOES BREAK UP TEZUFUJI, which i really like. xD but this got me hooked. :]

more, please? this is reallyy god :D :D :D

OK, so why is there no next chapter yet? ;_;

o_o Ooh. Isn't Marilyn the name of the bonsai tree as well? Y'know, the bonsai in the Tenipuri chibi!eppie. XD Marilyn...

It's cool you included Takahisa and Sengoku too, if even for a while. x3

I KNEW it was Tezuka. -snaps fingers- Yay! ;_; It's really sad he died, though.

Atobe...Has a son. o_o Woah, I wonder how that'll turn out.

Your writing is full of cool elements and twists! X)

Poor Eiji-kun. ;_; I wonder who it was that hurt him so badly. X_X

I love Golden Pair too, and the GP angst is very thick here as well. :'D Wow. Even in an AU, you still portray Oishi's motherly side very well.

Oh how I am easily swayed to liking a pairing when I read a good!fic. XD This is your first romance fic? Oh gosh, I applaud you. You just converted me into liking AtoFu. I love how you convey both their personalities so well. And the dead man...Tezuka, right? I'm taking a wild guess. XD; Maybe? Hm, I'll find out! X) -goes to read the next chapter-