Very interesting, very interesting. I don't care for the half-human thing myself, but this is beautifully written. I love your portrayal of the young Doctor, as well as his father (who is perhaps a bit like the Hartnell Doctor, hmm?) I just love this, it paints such a fascinating picture of life on Gallifrey.

You wrote this so excellently, that I had to stop reading before I became hypnotized!

Excellent.

Oooo! Me like, me like! Tis totally cool! _ (Don't mind me. It's past midnight and I've been drinking soda.)