Reviews for Mobile Suit Gundam 0084: The Last Sons of Delaz
Fireminer chapter 21 . 7/8/2013
Splendid! This story had gained its place between the best!
GM ace chapter 21 . 2/20/2006
Ah, yes. The second of the great Trilogy. Quite a good showing here as well, I must say. The return of the old characters was great, and you brought in some great new ones, like Jake, Hawkins, and Major Dolvich. This mostly Zeon-centric fic was a blast. The fall of Silvie, the enlightenment of Ming, and yet another solid blow to that *er Niccolo.

I heard recently at Gundamwatch that you were starting a rewrite of WitS, after having written 28 chapters. I read those 28 chapters, and thought they were good; if you're improving them, than WOW! But, I was wondering, why haven't you posted it here?
Warp Ligia Obscura chapter 21 . 1/26/2006
Very good fic, transcends praise. Sylvie the schizo Newtype, whoo. Can't wait for WitS!
Zeonic Freak chapter 1 . 12/3/2004
i havent heard of your name in quite a whlie. i first started reading your fanfics back in the spring of 2002, and by then, i had become a gundam fan with some of my friends. i love your work. i have your stories printed out and stored somewhere becasue i would take them to school and read them when ever i had free time. there are the best fanfics ever.

you were in the middle of the warriors of the shadows fanfic and then stoped. i am just wondering why.
Zinegata chapter 1 . 11/6/2004
Posled-

I attribute it to Ming's experience, adrenalin, fanaticism, and the incompetence of the vast majority of his enemies for the massacre of the Federal forces. Will not comment further than that _

Oh, and he was only shot in the shoulder. His leg had been healed up by then _
PoslednjiPartizan chapter 17 . 11/6/2004
I liked this ine too altough I wished it ended better for Sylvie.

But ther is one mayor flaw (from my point of view). Ming is here like some sort of super human! He climbs into GM with broken leg and shot through shoulder. When you are shot in the limb it becomes useless and if you don't aply first aid you fall into shock due to bleeding. Yet he gets into cockpit and fights of the entire federal force.
His Divine Shadow chapter 21 . 11/5/2004
Still the fic I credit as my ultimate inspiration. The second of the epic trilogy makes its appearance!

Good luck with the rewrite of "Warriors in the Shadows". I hope it goes as well as its predecessors have, and look forward to seeing it here with its brethren, where it belongs.
InjuredPelican chapter 5 . 11/3/2004
It's a pretty cool and very well written story.
SulliMike23 chapter 1 . 11/1/2004
I see you've decided to post the rest of your series here Zine. Not bad as usual.