I like this thought

-he feels it like an ache, like an escalating action potential, when he has to hold himself back. I think so much of his constant fidgeting and nervous energy would dissipate if he could just TOUCH someone, pass the charge off like a building static surge

Great work, the emotion was good

-incoherent gibbering-

perfect! love how you chanel Jack!

You know, I never thought about it before, but you're absolutely right. And I love the last sentence-I usually think stuff like that sounds corny, but this one was perfect!

Very good word portrait of the Col.

Wow. What a perfect ending. And the bit about Teal'c is so true...

I think this is just so true of the character! Nicely done!

That's a really interesting theory (and story). I've noticed the rare moments when Jack is so happy he grabs one of his tem in a hug (or a sude shoulder hus...) and I truly love those moments. I think I would agree with you that it just looks "right."

Great job.

That's a really great fic! I really like how you explored that aspect of the characters. Really well done and well written. Great job!

Yay! Very nicely done - great discriptives for Jack - Loved the last couple lines, they were perfect! Keep up the great work! :-)

Excellent.

Oh my God...that was so deep and beautiful. How the heck can you manage to know such a complex character so well, and be able to translate him so movingly? I don't really know how, but please keep doing it...

Very poignant and insightful. I totally agree with the idea of Jack being such a tactile person...in the show he's allways fiddling with something, whether its a pen, his gun, whatever. Beautifully written too. Well done!

Nicely written.

Impressive little piece of insight about Jack's character! Bravo!