Reviews for Midnight Snack |
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Yemi Hikari chapter 1 . 12/13/2019 I'm not sure if Gaara would have been a messy eater or not, the idea being nobody taught him basic social skills of any kind. Which, while I can understand where people would be coming from, kind of flies in the face of the fact Gaara was the one leading the siblings and telling his siblings to act socially responsible. Yet, if he was struggling to consume energy to regain his mass amounts of chakra, would he care about being messy? It's not something I'd say yes on with the later content I think, but with the older stuff - yes, I'd say yes. |
mm-chan chapter 1 . 4/16/2018 What a lovely, well-written story! Thank you! |
reader chapter 1 . 3/3/2017 3 |
jf chapter 1 . 4/6/2014 well written! |
CrystalBud chapter 1 . 6/27/2013 aww...how sweet, loved it |
TrisakAminawn chapter 1 . 7/11/2012 Awwww. That was adorable. While preserving enough severe dysfunctionality not to be glurge. Gaara eating everything like that, and the thank-you, and their shared compulsion to take care of him. If there's that, then he'll be fine, right? I found myself severely distracted from the fic, however, by their father's mysterious return to the realm of the living. First I was wondering how they got a new Kage so fast, and who it was, and then after the shopping I was like, what? They're still Kazekage's children? Did Orochimaru un-kill him again or something? He does not have that power. ; Or, well, he does, but in the time frame in question he didn't have functioning arms to perform the jutsu with, and I think the sand-nin would notice and object to a Edo Tensei confetti-zombie serving as Kazekage. |
2c chapter 1 . 4/9/2012 wasn't their dad dead at this point? gotta love the coming closer as a sand family fics out there |
Aku no Hanabi chapter 1 . 11/12/2011 Now I'm hungry... |
Miroku Himiyashi chapter 1 . 10/28/2011 Lol, you gotta love Gaara XD. Thanks for writing it |
GSYH chapter 1 . 5/14/2011 brb, dust in my eyes I just love the love between the Sand Sibs, so tentative and yet so very there. The way they must have been raised, with so much fear and yearning. |
Anonymoose chapter 1 . 1/23/2011 Nice story. |
meri47 chapter 1 . 8/31/2010 This fic was very good. There aren't enough fics out there that explore the relationship between the Sand Siblings. Keep up the good work! |
Silverchild of the winds chapter 1 . 6/16/2010 that was precious. just a day pf sibling love, i love it. |
XspriteyX chapter 1 . 11/8/2009 AW there so nice to himX :D |
Mana Prism chapter 1 . 7/1/2009 Aww...They really do care for each other~ 3 You're great at writing little everyday details! I love it that the story's from Kankuro's perspective too The only critique I have is on this line: "Kankurou usually attracted attention when he went out, because of who's son he was, and who's brother." - it should be whose instead of who's. But nevermind that. This was written years ago anyways. I find it funny and sort of ironic that what truly made Gaara human in his siblings' eyes is the ice cream on his face - not his angst or his loneliness...or anything emotional like that. hahaha! Sandsibs stories make me all fuzzy inside~ xD |