Think about what your writing because Sakura just suddenly became good at fighting when she doesn't know her abilities...unless you mention that its an intinct for her to be able to fight like that. Also you should've made Sakura's POV when she was fighting... The instinct bit I told you about (if your going to use the instinct idea) should be in Sakura's POV (because she's the only one who will know that its an insticnt to be fighting really good like that)

Again fix your writing... And I'm pretty sure Naruto wouldn't tell Sakura's secret to anyone if its that serious. Aannd I'm pretty sure Kakashi wouldn't tell Sakura's secret to Naruto... Kakashi would want Sakura to tell Naruto her secret on her own (whenever she's ready)

You writing is not that bad but it not good either... Be more descripted, fix some grammar errors

Hey there update soon love this story

hi cool fic keep up the good work _

Great story. Please update. It's really good. I wonder when Sakura will wake up.

that was soo beautiful *still wiping tears*

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how 'bout an update SOON please :)

please update soon!

Update! i mean really update. pleaze.

Good job so far. This story is good. What happens next? Well keep up the good work and can not wait till the next chapter.

wo ho that was great please continue that story

this is a god story- lol- but I think it's going a bit too fast- but it could just be me- anyways, keep up the great work!

OMG that was great i wish something like that would happen in the series but we dont knwo if it will so cant wait for your next chapter

Update! Update! _ AW... Sasuke-kun and Sakura kissed! *drool*

KOUZUMI AND SASUSAKU RULES!

*giggles* update soon!