This is good whis u woild update this...but on the wives blaize for black..padma the ambassador and luna for potter and susan as the 4th wife to the ambassador but 3 wives would be better than 4...or have Luna and Susan as potter wives. I really dont know he needs 4 wives...

I’ m Annoyed that even though this story is marked complete,it really is not!

Where is Dobby? Are his 2 Potter elfs kay?

A great story here so far!

Truly enjoyed your story I am saddened that you did not finish the story it is been 10 years since your last update I am calling it dead thank you

I look forward to the next update.

This is an interesting story. It moves a little fast for me to feel immersed in the story, but I think the plot is fun.

I wish you had not stopped writing this story. What is wrong with Harry's elves? Is Luna the Potter bride? Who is the fourth? What happens with the Black sisters & later, Draco?

Great Story, I guess it is abandoned to bad I was enjoying wondering what would happen next? Thank you for taking the time to write. I hope in the future you choose to continue the story.

13 years later... any chance of a update? Just read the whole story through and it’s a shame that it’s not updated... Wanting more... you’ New avid fan.

This is really bad, it make no sense on how or why je became a goblin ambasadore. Plus the stupid multy wife situation with no sense just because the gablin want it plus the mayor stupidity of all making a moronic male female

Love your story, wish you had finished it. Don't worry so much about errors, its not a big deal. Wonderful story and an even better plot. Hope to find more stories that are just as good. Hope your okey!

I know it’s beem over ten years since you posted this story, but I just have to say that I love it! Your writing is a good balance of descriptive and action and dialogue. Aside from a few mixed up words that spell check wouldn’t catch (When Harry initially told Hermione, you used defiantly instead of definitely a couple of times. Things like that.) it’s one of the better fanfics I’ve read. I was captivated and so eager to find out what would happen with Harry’s magic, and the house elves, and the Order. Does Harry get to use a wand at school? I’m definitely sad that you’ve abandoned this story. If you ever pick it up, I will read it with great joy!

Poor Harry.

Can he have some hormones, I mean... he's a teenager. even if it's just sneaking glances at them. It is really good but ...PLEASE, he's what? Over 16 years old, and those thoughts never cross his mind?